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The Selkie Love

He takes a human to marry

17 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Kace, another great Loop poem...and
a story told...
sounds like this could be a movie...
I learned a lot about the Selkies life...

and you are so right...you have to believe
in magic...and you can go anywhere...

very nicely written sweetie pie...and your
picture is perfect...what came first???
the story or the picture???...
I love it...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
    There was a movie made in Scotland. Of course it is part of their folklore. Many thanks. K xx
reply by l.raven on 18-Mar-2023
    your are sooooo welcome...always...
    love xxoo
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
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This is quite an interesting poem. I've never heard of Selkies before. I am not familiar with the Scottish people either. However, your poem is intriguing. Thank you for sharing this knowledge.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
    Hi Rachel, Scotland is full of myths and legends. I visited there and found the people warm and friendly, unlike the weather! K xx
Comment from kahpot
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What a wonderful read, reminds me a bit about a film called "splash" true love is giving the one you love your all, very clever using the last word of a line for the start of the next, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
    Hello Kahpot (what does that mean?) Glad you enjoyed my Selkie poem. I write loop poems without rhyming. Thanks for your good wishes. K xx
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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I enjoyed this poem for the myth and mystery of it all. The Selkie and the land human. A love match made to test the boundaries. But, where there is a will there is a way. An enjoyable loop poem read.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading DD. K xx
Comment from mermaids
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Of course I loved reading this one about my cousins, the selkies. I did not know about the importance of the coats. Your poem reads like a mini movie and takes the reader to another place. Makes me want to go to Scotland!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    I spent a month driving around UK and Scotland. They are such lovely people, the Scots are so warm.
    Thanks Elaine for reading. K xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job retelling this legend in your
signature style, Aussie. I've read about Selkies.
Your words painted a picture for readers. I liked
your unique approach not only to the theme but
the choice of style.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
    Hi Jan, Thanks so much for reading; glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment from w.j.debi
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You've done a great job with the Selkie legend. This is the first one I've read where the Selkie is male and lures the human woman into the sea. Looks like it worked out very well for both of them.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
    Hello W.J. Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, K xx
Comment from country ranch writer
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Greatlegend being told, the Irish. Scots and outerkands believe in their myths and legends of old.eventgis day nanylibe and believe in the stories that have grown along the way.seej and you will find my grandma used to say, the archives are there for you to dig up.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
    Thank you for reading Barb. Glad you enjoyed. Love, Kay xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This folklore story is magical and also a little scary as these seals are determined to tale a human bride which is rather weird, a story well told here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
    The human has to love him else he can't take her home. Thank you Dolly. K xx
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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This is a good loop poem yet it lasted a little too long for my taste. I loved the meaning of it and the author's notes explained well what the meaning was. This is done very well with rhyming words along with looping the beginning word to the end of the next line.
Enjoy the day, my friend!
Jesse

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
    My dear friend, It is a story/poem therefore it is long, to capture the adventure. Thanks for reading and no more riding broncos' - blessings, Kay.
reply by Jesse James Doty on 27-Feb-2023
    I understand. I have trouble reading long poems since my eyesight is fading due to glaucoma, among other things.
    Have a great week!
    Jesse
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
    Strike me lucky! I have a hole in my left retina and have to have both eyes operated on for cataracts. Keep up with your eye drops. I am an old lady, you are just a junior. I will be 78 in Sept. :-(
reply by Jesse James Doty on 28-Feb-2023
    I had cataract surgery already and still have new eye problems, with five different eye drops to administer three times a day. My age will be 69 in May so, I am not far behind you.

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2023
    We are fortunate here, it won't cost me anything on the Public Health. That's a hell of a lot of eye drops, why? And you only look 50! K xx