Ode To My Iphone
In celebration of my cell phone.50 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
This little poem is one that I'm certain most everyone who reads it can relate. It's almost as if that little box of button almost controls our lives, morning, noon, and night. And many use it for an alarm in the next morning too. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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This little poem is one that I'm certain most everyone who reads it can relate. It's almost as if that little box of button almost controls our lives, morning, noon, and night. And many use it for an alarm in the next morning too. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your kind remarks.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I wonder what people did before them! I see people talking with them in the supermarket, some are so loud, I can hear the entire conversation. A fun very well-written poem with spot-on rhyme. I have an iPhone but prefer my landline.
I enjoyed reading,
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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I wonder what people did before them! I see people talking with them in the supermarket, some are so loud, I can hear the entire conversation. A fun very well-written poem with spot-on rhyme. I have an iPhone but prefer my landline.
I enjoyed reading,
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Yhank you Mary, your comments are kind and supportive.
Comment from JT traveller
I'm glad I read the author's notes!
Prior to this your poem felt like it was praising your inability to live without a phone. Now I can clearly see that it is, as us Australians say, "a pisstake". Very clever use of humour. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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I'm glad I read the author's notes!
Prior to this your poem felt like it was praising your inability to live without a phone. Now I can clearly see that it is, as us Australians say, "a pisstake". Very clever use of humour. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you for getting my little joke.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem about cellphones and how attached some people are.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Excellent poem about cellphones and how attached some people are.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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You are absolutely correct. Thank you.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great job wit your poem. Very well written. Your rhyming and meter flow smoothly making this a nice read. I agree they are necessary,, but I too would not be lost without my phone. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Great job wit your poem. Very well written. Your rhyming and meter flow smoothly making this a nice read. I agree they are necessary,, but I too would not be lost without my phone. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your generous review comments.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
And me without a six! I love this!!!
Please accept my virtual, six stars from my heart.
Next time you have that nightmare, then just hit restart
This is from your sister, she's blonde, but pretty smart.
I can see your iphone, is the Apple of your Art
Awesome and comical poem, my dear bro and friend!!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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And me without a six! I love this!!!
Please accept my virtual, six stars from my heart.
Next time you have that nightmare, then just hit restart
This is from your sister, she's blonde, but pretty smart.
I can see your iphone, is the Apple of your Art
Awesome and comical poem, my dear bro and friend!!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you sis. I appreciate your generous and supportive comments. You are the apple of my heart, much more than any device could ever be. Nothing takes the place of you.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I agree, Nomi. Too many miss out on real life as they
believe they must never be without or with it turned off.
I hate to see groups at restaurants looking down instead
of looking and interacting with each other. You did a great
job with your poem. The end rhymes and internal rhymes
worked well. You gave readers great details about the phone
in your ode.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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I agree, Nomi. Too many miss out on real life as they
believe they must never be without or with it turned off.
I hate to see groups at restaurants looking down instead
of looking and interacting with each other. You did a great
job with your poem. The end rhymes and internal rhymes
worked well. You gave readers great details about the phone
in your ode.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful review comments.
Comment from mermaids
This is the first poem I have read about a cellphone. It seems that many people in today's world are attached to their phones and are using them constantly. Excellent poem that captures how many cannot be parted from their phones. Sometimes I find cellphones frustrating and annoying.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is the first poem I have read about a cellphone. It seems that many people in today's world are attached to their phones and are using them constantly. Excellent poem that captures how many cannot be parted from their phones. Sometimes I find cellphones frustrating and annoying.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your great review comments.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is fun and humorous and I love how it rhymes. One thing I might point out is that until I read the author's notes I wasn't sure if you were serious or not. I would suggest putting the listing under humor poetry instead of general poetry. This is great fun and I smiled to myself when I read it. I have a cellphone but I am not attached to it like some folks I know.
Thanks for the laughs!
Jesse
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is fun and humorous and I love how it rhymes. One thing I might point out is that until I read the author's notes I wasn't sure if you were serious or not. I would suggest putting the listing under humor poetry instead of general poetry. This is great fun and I smiled to myself when I read it. I have a cellphone but I am not attached to it like some folks I know.
Thanks for the laughs!
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your great support.
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Glad I could help with my suggestion.
Comment from Thesis
This is a good synopsis of how many view that electronic device. Growing up without any electronics, I recognize the need for them in today's society, but wish we weren't so dependent on them. I enjoyed the times when you would actually be able to go out for the day and enjoy it without any interruptions.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is a good synopsis of how many view that electronic device. Growing up without any electronics, I recognize the need for them in today's society, but wish we weren't so dependent on them. I enjoyed the times when you would actually be able to go out for the day and enjoy it without any interruptions.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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As handy as they may prove to be in an emergency. I cannot argue that times were less intrusive when they did not exist. Thank you for your review.
