Taste of My Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Extinguish the Pain"The Pathway to Pain and Misery
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Grief never leaves us, but we learn to live with it. God will help us with that. I know from experience that He will. Thank you for sharing. I hope writing helps with the healing process.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Grief never leaves us, but we learn to live with it. God will help us with that. I know from experience that He will. Thank you for sharing. I hope writing helps with the healing process.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Pain is ever present and how we deal with itos quite remarkable, both Positively and in a Negative way.
Thanks and as always,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Edwin Llera
I think you did a great job reflecting a conversation and developing a rhyme scheme. I had a little trouble establishing a rhythm while I read. It may be the start of each stanza has difference stress syllable counts.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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I think you did a great job reflecting a conversation and developing a rhyme scheme. I had a little trouble establishing a rhythm while I read. It may be the start of each stanza has difference stress syllable counts.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you Edwin.
Appreciate the time, as well as the Review.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Again you produce such a poignant piece of writing from a father to a son that my heart clenches for you. I have two Grown songs and I just can't imagine. In the best way you know how from the heart and is there any other place to be I ask you?. That you share with us it's a beautiful thing .And you pick the healthiest way possible to relieve it In some measure every time you do. There is no doubt you are an extremely talented writing. I have no trouble Deciphering what you're saying beginning middle and end such is the clarity of your words. One cannot critique pain or loss. It is there or it isn't what comes out of the envy or pen or on your keyboard Certainly shows the heart beneath so excellent work I thank you again for sharing it's very deep and personal thing with us. At the risk of possibly overstepping just a tad no that comes from the heart I would say this to you. Your son is alive well and happy on the other side he would wish you to do the same alive well and happy here until the time you come together again. For him it will be tomorrow and for you it could be Many more years. Who's that doesn't may he would wish you to smile when you think of him rather than Grieve. Obviously we don't know each other and I'm not sure if we do these things already or not but I do know something and I do know This... I did not lose a child but I lost a husband when my children were baby My life boiled down to 2 simple things. 2 questions I asked myself 1st one is "did I do the best I could ? And the 2nd 1 is there anything more I can do? And if he answers to those questions or yes or no And I'm a feel like a duck with rain on its back and then Let it roll off As best as I can. I'm no expert but it seems to me that's all that anyone could ask of us is the best we can do and we can do no more. I hope I did not overstep by saying these things to you. God bless you and your family.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Again you produce such a poignant piece of writing from a father to a son that my heart clenches for you. I have two Grown songs and I just can't imagine. In the best way you know how from the heart and is there any other place to be I ask you?. That you share with us it's a beautiful thing .And you pick the healthiest way possible to relieve it In some measure every time you do. There is no doubt you are an extremely talented writing. I have no trouble Deciphering what you're saying beginning middle and end such is the clarity of your words. One cannot critique pain or loss. It is there or it isn't what comes out of the envy or pen or on your keyboard Certainly shows the heart beneath so excellent work I thank you again for sharing it's very deep and personal thing with us. At the risk of possibly overstepping just a tad no that comes from the heart I would say this to you. Your son is alive well and happy on the other side he would wish you to do the same alive well and happy here until the time you come together again. For him it will be tomorrow and for you it could be Many more years. Who's that doesn't may he would wish you to smile when you think of him rather than Grieve. Obviously we don't know each other and I'm not sure if we do these things already or not but I do know something and I do know This... I did not lose a child but I lost a husband when my children were baby My life boiled down to 2 simple things. 2 questions I asked myself 1st one is "did I do the best I could ? And the 2nd 1 is there anything more I can do? And if he answers to those questions or yes or no And I'm a feel like a duck with rain on its back and then Let it roll off As best as I can. I'm no expert but it seems to me that's all that anyone could ask of us is the best we can do and we can do no more. I hope I did not overstep by saying these things to you. God bless you and your family.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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I've been saving this for you for last cuz it's hard to reply to this lanky review.
The best way I can describe myself when it comes to my writing abilities.
I'm one of the few if any of other been selected to be able to write first from the Mind, Then the Broken Heart,
Into the Soul.
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There's no hesitation.
I've been described as a slam poet.
It all comes almost 99 and a half percent from above a gift from Heavenly Father, his son, Jesus Christ and my son Jason..
It's taking me 20 years to get to this point. Before this year's over I hope to have a thousand written books.
Doctor Ricky 1025
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
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My apologizes....good luck
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Grief never leaves us when we have lost someone close and we learn to live with it and no one can know of another person's pain and how they suffer inside, a poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Grief never leaves us when we have lost someone close and we learn to live with it and no one can know of another person's pain and how they suffer inside, a poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thanks Dolly and yes, Pain is an extreme state of being on the edge.
If mental, it can result in loss of life in some instances.
I have survived Mis Pains Touch and learned how much.
A Human being can take before the edge becomes your demise.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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My prayers are with you Ricky x x x