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No need to set an extra place at the table.4 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-stated Death 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly presented and is easy to understand. I like the last line a lot.
However, your poem looks squeezed into the poem box. You may expand the poem box by hitting before the first line enter once or twice, and at the end of the last line hit enter again once or twice. This will give you space around your poem and a better presentation to view.
The photo fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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This is a well-stated Death 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly presented and is easy to understand. I like the last line a lot.
However, your poem looks squeezed into the poem box. You may expand the poem box by hitting before the first line enter once or twice, and at the end of the last line hit enter again once or twice. This will give you space around your poem and a better presentation to view.
The photo fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you! Great tip, pretty lady! I appreciate you.
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You are welcome. I try to help.
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You are a big help!!!!
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😀
Comment from JLR
dear poet, the words that you shared exist in the world that you have shared with us with an advantage of believing in the miracle of an afterlife. This is a very well-developed thought and you should do well in the voting booth. Good success.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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dear poet, the words that you shared exist in the world that you have shared with us with an advantage of believing in the miracle of an afterlife. This is a very well-developed thought and you should do well in the voting booth. Good success.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Sir. Stiff competition gives the soul a little flavor. (Heh heh)
Comment from Nicki Nance
Absolutely perfect graphic for this little gem. I love that it is written in informal language. That it has a punch line is icing on the literary cake.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Absolutely perfect graphic for this little gem. I love that it is written in informal language. That it has a punch line is icing on the literary cake.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Nicki. You are very kind.
Comment from jessizero
I love the wordplay with "soul food." You did a great job with this 5-7-5 poem. (Yes, I counted the syllables.) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I love the wordplay with "soul food." You did a great job with this 5-7-5 poem. (Yes, I counted the syllables.) Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you! I figured most of these would be serious so I went for the wisecrack.