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Will This Pain End

Death 5-7-5 contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from SimianSavant
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I certainly hope you're joking about losing a daughter six months ago. If it was anyone else I would assume it's real, but your ability to assume different characters is legendary here. If you are NOT joking we should definitely talk.


 Comment Written 24-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
    Hey, bro. Yes, my daughter died the 24th of Aug. She died from messing around with that fentanyl. She was 36.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I am sorry for your loss and these words are filled with sorrow and grief and drugs can be so lethal and we know not the outcome of our actions when we take opioids, a passionate and melancholy write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Dolly.
Comment from jessizero
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I am so sorry for your loss. Your poem was stark and visceral, and it had the correct syllable count. Thank you for having the courage to share it here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2023

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Jessi. I only wish sharing it here helped. Have a great weekend, J.