Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

If I had six stars left I would have given you one just for the research and author`s notes. You don`t make any of your stuff up. It comes from personal insight, awareness and reading. Good for you.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023

I like karma and how it works. Over my fireplace I have a big Buddha in light green.

It?s a ceramic plaque my mother made and pa cemented to the wall.

reply by Kaiku on 27-Feb-2023

👍

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023

Your poem ?crushing ? has its first vote😋

Best of luck🍀

reply by Kaiku on 27-Feb-2023

a mother warms even the coldest of days. a vote blows your way.

reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023

Thank you for the gift ! 🙂

reply by Kaiku on 27-Feb-2023

SMILE

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, For Some..., has the proper formatting and suggests that there may be various paths to take once the exit door opens and we step out. ....................................................

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

Yes, depending on one?s beliefs.

I wanted to approach this contest hopefully in a different way as the other contestants. The competition is tough off late.

Thanks for reading and reviewing my short poem on death.

Keep safe!

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Oh wow! Powerful words that truly packed a punch no matter what your belief system is. A truly enjoyable and thought provoking read.

So much conveyed in so few words. I congratulate you.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

Thanks for the positive feedback .

I wanted to describe what death represents/ means for people from different creeds .. a different approach that hopefully makes my entry more interesting.

Keep safe!