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Ode to the hard living banana

screwed up nursery rhymes

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao! , so nice to see you back posting .. for many weeks I kept an eye out hoping you would return.

I saw your username below on the contest page for :Acrostic Contest With Your Name
and my eyes nearly popped out.

You do have an unique sense of humour which most of the time works with me.

Inventive, great rhyme and funny.. kids rhymes poems are usually boring but these new versions are entertaining.


Welcome back !

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
    Thank you Tempeste! I've been busy, working on an alliterative story by mail for the nephew and I just finished a 75-hour work week. No end in sight. So I won't be on here much unfortunately, since almost anytime I write means time not working overtime, and car damages need to be paid for. There are still some 60 reviews I need to respond to from last year too. Hmm, any ideas what we should make up for a new contest idea?
reply by tempeste on 06-Mar-2023
    Ciao ! 🙂

    I was so glad to see you posting again!

    75 hour work week is crazy .. it s nearly double the traditional 40 hours.

    Are you still working for Amazon ?

    Freezing cold in the winter in those huge warehouses?

    Bezos makes so much money , especially since the pandemic , why can?t he make sure his workers are safe and working in suitable conditions?

    I hope you stay around for awhile.

    At the moment I can?t think of any new contest but if I get a bright idea , I?ll let you know .

    Take care ! 🍀
Comment from JT traveller
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Absolutely hilarious. Thank you for the morning laugh. You clearly have a wicked sense of humour which I appreciate. Thinking outside the box makes this tribute particularly unique. When I read the term banana I immediately thought of my Chinese friends in Australia who refer to themselves as bananas - yellow on the outside, white on the inside. As a Queenslander we refer to ourselves as banana benders, others in Australia do too. A very socially acceptable term.

I am still laughing. Thankyou ð???ð???

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
    That's quite funny about your Chinese friends. Thank you JT -- glad you enjoyed it. I just added one more at the end : )
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I have no idea what this post is about and perhaps some notes to guide readers would be appropriate? The warnings seem totally unnecessary. Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
    Thanks Dolly! I took your suggestions.