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Comment from RainbewLatte
What a joyful read this was. And I hope the word "joyful" isn't taken the wrong way. I find myself so fascinated by this site and the boundaries one has to meet in writing poetry, yet one is able to meet and exceed such boundaries, and I suppose it will forever live beyond me.
Seeing the victory, it is undeniably well-deserved. Thank you so much for the delightful read.
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What a joyful read this was. And I hope the word "joyful" isn't taken the wrong way. I find myself so fascinated by this site and the boundaries one has to meet in writing poetry, yet one is able to meet and exceed such boundaries, and I suppose it will forever live beyond me.
Seeing the victory, it is undeniably well-deserved. Thank you so much for the delightful read.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from Dr. Nad
Hey Sis, this is wonderful on multiple levels. The pic is perfect for this wonderful rhyming poem that has stringent literary requirements. The aesthetics are meticulous as are the flow of both words and thought. For me you have multiplied the difficulty of piece and interjecting the same rhyme not only at the end of the line but also in the middle. Great Job.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Hey Sis, this is wonderful on multiple levels. The pic is perfect for this wonderful rhyming poem that has stringent literary requirements. The aesthetics are meticulous as are the flow of both words and thought. For me you have multiplied the difficulty of piece and interjecting the same rhyme not only at the end of the line but also in the middle. Great Job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023
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Thanks Nad for this awesome review and kind words for my Hey Jude poem.
I truly appreciate your six stars very much! You are one of a kind my swee5 little brother!
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Most welcome for the review and I thank you for your kind words concerning me. Somewhere I wrote kind of in somewhat lengthy bare outline of a book I'm working on: '"Not for your "I"s only.'"
I am interested in your HONEST REAL take on the possibility of that becoming a book.
Comment from victor 66
A very lovely poem about an atrocity that goes on in schools all too often. I think you have gently written what goes on and hopefully how it is resolved. Congratulations on your win.
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A very lovely poem about an atrocity that goes on in schools all too often. I think you have gently written what goes on and hopefully how it is resolved. Congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from jessizero
I can see why you won this contest! You wrote a great poem with a nice story with a great monorhyme. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
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I can see why you won this contest! You wrote a great poem with a nice story with a great monorhyme. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on your well deserved win of the Even the Odds contest. You chose an important subject to highlight...bullying. In this poem, there is a satisfying ending.
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Congratulations on your well deserved win of the Even the Odds contest. You chose an important subject to highlight...bullying. In this poem, there is a satisfying ending.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from susand3022
Someone's bringing one of our favorite ladies back to us with this prompt!
You did a good job with Yvette's poetic form, Author. I do miss her mathematic poems as well as her wonderful stories.
Nicely done,
Susan :)
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Someone's bringing one of our favorite ladies back to us with this prompt!
You did a good job with Yvette's poetic form, Author. I do miss her mathematic poems as well as her wonderful stories.
Nicely done,
Susan :)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant entry for the contest dear anonymous! I can relate because I was teased as a child. I didnt quite fit in.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
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This is a brilliant entry for the contest dear anonymous! I can relate because I was teased as a child. I didnt quite fit in.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from bob cullen
I came here expecting to read the lyrics of the great Beatles song. Instead, I found a clever type of poem I've not seen before. It truly is clever. Loved how you maintained the rhyme throughout.
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I came here expecting to read the lyrics of the great Beatles song. Instead, I found a clever type of poem I've not seen before. It truly is clever. Loved how you maintained the rhyme throughout.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from Aussie
Never will we win anger against anger, ridicule is a form of not understanding fellow man/boy. To win the day, give to those who would hurt you. Jesus said "if a man asks for your singlet, give him your coat also." K xx
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Never will we win anger against anger, ridicule is a form of not understanding fellow man/boy. To win the day, give to those who would hurt you. Jesus said "if a man asks for your singlet, give him your coat also." K xx
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
Comment from forestport12
I'm always amazed at how one writes types of poems with such rules or constraints. When I write, I almost despise rules. Free verse versus others. I l do love the Dr. Suess feel it offers and scheme is better than cute. Memorable.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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I'm always amazed at how one writes types of poems with such rules or constraints. When I write, I almost despise rules. Free verse versus others. I l do love the Dr. Suess feel it offers and scheme is better than cute. Memorable.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Hi Forest, Yes rules can be so constricting, but some of these poems are fun to challenge yourself a little more with it. Thanks for your very kind comments. Much appreciated, my friend.
