Is Spring Lost?
3/5/3 Collom Lune12 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent for the Collom Lune Contest. Daffodils are so pretty.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Excellent for the Collom Lune Contest. Daffodils are so pretty.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this well thought review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The presentation is well written. Love daffodils, a spring flower which is just so welcomed. Your words do make us feel like spring is lost. The snow is still on the ground, and they haven't started peeking through the frozen earth yet.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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The presentation is well written. Love daffodils, a spring flower which is just so welcomed. Your words do make us feel like spring is lost. The snow is still on the ground, and they haven't started peeking through the frozen earth yet.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from jaded831
Seeing a daffodil in the snow is sad but happy. Your poem brought that out and made the reader feel for the daffodil. Very creative and unique, your poem should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Seeing a daffodil in the snow is sad but happy. Your poem brought that out and made the reader feel for the daffodil. Very creative and unique, your poem should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you, for the review. "Unique" was what I was thinking about.
Comment from kahpot
I hope spring is not lost, a beautiful poem, the daffodil does look like it could be praying for some sunshine, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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I hope spring is not lost, a beautiful poem, the daffodil does look like it could be praying for some sunshine, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you
Comment from mermaids
Your poem reminds me of my Mom's daffodils that always bloom in March regardless of the weather. I am sure they would be thinking your words and asking if Spring is lost. I like how this poem is from the daffodil's viewpoint. This is a clever and creative poem.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Your poem reminds me of my Mom's daffodils that always bloom in March regardless of the weather. I am sure they would be thinking your words and asking if Spring is lost. I like how this poem is from the daffodil's viewpoint. This is a clever and creative poem.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your lovely review. This year spring will definitely be lost.
Comment from Kaiku
Good job with this prompt. I always find it a challenge to determine what theme to use when entering these writing prompts. Our readers get to be a bit fickle at times. Yours should do well. Nice.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Good job with this prompt. I always find it a challenge to determine what theme to use when entering these writing prompts. Our readers get to be a bit fickle at times. Yours should do well. Nice.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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You're so right about being "fickle" - I entered a contest with an "exceptional" and it only received one vote. Oh well, than you for the review. I just went for personification and hope it works.
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Crazy?right!
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
is a great question! I pondered on snow on the Daffodil and it made me
wonder too! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
is a great question! I pondered on snow on the Daffodil and it made me
wonder too! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Thank you for this very well written review. Yes, poor confused daffodil.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Poor daffodil, all covered with snow. However, something like this is a common sight here in Michigan. Your poem is cute and creative. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Poor daffodil, all covered with snow. However, something like this is a common sight here in Michigan. Your poem is cute and creative. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the Collom Lune contest. The text is an okay size but could be one size larger under such a large visual.
The message is clearly stated except here} or spring lost? You need to replace the "or" with "is or put is after the word or. Now one line out of three is unclear. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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This is a good entry into the Collom Lune contest. The text is an okay size but could be one size larger under such a large visual.
The message is clearly stated except here} or spring lost? You need to replace the "or" with "is or put is after the word or. Now one line out of three is unclear. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thanks
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic
and followed the prompt instructions.
-I like how you personalize the daffodil
as it wonders about the snow and whether
it is early or spring is lost.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic
and followed the prompt instructions.
-I like how you personalize the daffodil
as it wonders about the snow and whether
it is early or spring is lost.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much, for this very perfect review.
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You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply.
