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One step forward &two steps back

A life changing realization

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Comment from Heather Knight
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Hi Jesse,
I have great faith in your ability to beat the odds and I'm sure you'll reach your goal. You are pretty resilient.
Thanks for sharing your personal story with us.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
    Thanks, Maria, for reviewing my portfolio and choosing two of my recent posts. Thanks for your support and I agree that I am resilient sometimes to a downfall.
    Have a great upcoming weekend!
    Jesse
reply by Heather Knight on 09-Apr-2023
    You too, Jesse.
Comment from w.j.debi
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When we are feeling good, it can be difficult to remember Not to do the things we shouldn't. I'm sorry to hear that it set you back, but impressed by your 'can do' spirit.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023

Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Jesse,
Sorry you had a set back. We all make this mistake. We think we are good enough to do what we used to and find out we were wrong. I am glad you learned your lesson and have the ambition to work for walking at the right speed.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
    Hello Joan. I only hope I have learned my lesson. I want to do what I used to do so badly, and I am still learning that I can't!
    I have the ambition to walk again and I cannot wait until the time when I can.
    I will keep writing and stay as healthy as possible!
    Jesse
reply by dragonpoet on 04-Mar-2023
    Hi,
    I can understand that. On February 19, I fell and hurt my back and I have found it exasperating that I can?t excuse the way I used t, still.
    Joan
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Interest-catching opening sentence.

"fight the good fight" an often overused cliche. Would there not be another way to phrase that comment?

A good and positive attitude. Just do not overdo your efforts. Whether wanted to or not, healing seems to take its sweet time in most situations.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
    The phrase fight to good fight is an endearing one that was told to me by a good friend, so I used it lovingly in my essay. I appreciate your caring comments and know that healing takes its sweet time!
    Jesse
Comment from Janet Foor
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One step forward and two steps back shows your tenacity and determination. You will survive and succeed in whatever you endeavor.

Well done Jesse.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
    You bet I will, Janet! I will succeed and survive no matter what stands in my way!
    Thanks for the kind words and support!
    Have a beautiful day!
    Jesse
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Jesse, Well, you at least had a good time. Unfortunately, it also caused physical setbacks. However, I do not doubt that with your determination and attitude, you will bounce back.
Good to see you writing again.
Best wishes for a speedier recovery.
Mary

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Mary, for these cheers and best wishes for my recovery. And you are right! I definitely had a good time yet it cost me dearly.
    Have a great week!
    Jesse
Comment from Jay Squires
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Well, Jesse, you raised a whole heckuva lot more questions than you provided answers to. Oh, Lordy, I am the master of stupidity most of all due to age-blindness (not blindness that comes with age, but blindness to my frailty). I'm vastly older, physically, than I was just a year ago.

Let me guess: you tried to ski? Either on water or in the snow? You say it wasn't your first rodeo ... I DID take that in the figurative sense. Please tell me you didn't get on an unbroken horse. Yet your name is Jesse James doty! It's hard to take the cowboy out of the title.

At any rate, I know you're up for nothing less than full recovery -- which I hope will come with a certain amount of future prudence, eh?

Jay

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
    Hello Jay. Thanks for your kind words and by the way my name is not the title. It is just my name and it has nothing to do with cowboys. I will keep to myself why I injured myself and hope to find a full recovery at the end of a lengthy relaxation and rest.
    Jesse
Comment from Aussie
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Some days are diamonds, some days are stones (John Denver) we have choices but it takes guts. Men don't bounce back like women. Women accept pain more readily because they are child-bearers. You know your limitations, I did too; stupidly went against spiritual advice - don't ride that motorcycle' ignored. Bullet proof me. One-legged garden gnome now! Hugs, K xx

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Kay, for this quote by John Denver!
    I can relate to the metaphor completely. I love your take on life knowing your limitations works well usually for me but sometimes I go too far with my activities and end up broken and bruised with a lot of time to recover! Thanks for the exceptional rating and review!
    And the hugs too!
    Hugs back to you, my friend!
    Jesse
reply by Aussie on 28-Feb-2023
    Hee, Hee, most blokes think they are bulletproof. You've nothing to prove, been there, done that and bought the T-shirt!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
    Yeah, I am still learning that lesson!
reply by Aussie on 01-Mar-2023
    We are on earth to learn lessons. Karma I suppose. The more we learn the less we will have to learn when we get to our real home. K xx
Comment from Bill Schott
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It's good to read of the dedication to progress that you are asserting. Sometimes hard to keep the eye on the prize, but always necessary to achieve it.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
    Yes, Bill. It is hard to keep the eye on the prize. Yet we keep on trying until we get it right! And it is always difficult but necessary to achieve it.
    I am glad you approve of my dedication to progressing forward toward the prize.
    Jesse
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
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I can relate to your poem. Great job. I wish you well. Keep up the work. keep writing once again. Enjoy your writing. Thank you. Enjoy your day. I can't wait to read more bravo.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Eric, for relating to my piece. I appreciate your kind words, and I will keep on writing as long as I am inspired to write!
    Have a great weekend!
    Jesse