Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 107 "Spring Nymph"Romantic Tanka Poems
15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this ambient fantasy write and you introduced spring with a subtle warmth as the cool winter fades. Much enjoyed, a fine Tanka, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed this ambient fantasy write and you introduced spring with a subtle warmth as the cool winter fades. Much enjoyed, a fine Tanka, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I love your poem of Spring Nymph. It's loaded with poetic tools like assonant and alliterations. The presentation is very good, too. You book is coming along well.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I love your poem of Spring Nymph. It's loaded with poetic tools like assonant and alliterations. The presentation is very good, too. You book is coming along well.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Lisa,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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I'm visiting Spain and it's beautiful. We visited Barcelona, Valencia and just arrived at Granada.
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That is awesome, I am so jelouse. My son and his wife are there too. They are visiting Barcelona and Madrid. His wife is very impressed
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We are in Granada. It's chilly here. The Alhambra and its Nasrids Palace are so elegant.
Barcelona was super busy. We are going to Seville and Madrid after Granada.
Comment from Heather Knight
Your poems are always beautifully written and the presentation is gorgeous.
I love the last line here, I think it´s very funny.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Your poems are always beautifully written and the presentation is gorgeous.
I love the last line here, I think it´s very funny.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Heather,
Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----spring hasn't sprung here yet, but looking forward to when it does. To me, it's the only season left that I can enjoybecause of climate change; the others can too extreme to enjoy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----spring hasn't sprung here yet, but looking forward to when it does. To me, it's the only season left that I can enjoybecause of climate change; the others can too extreme to enjoy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Mike,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from w.j.debi
This poem creates such beautiful imagery. I don't know much about the Japanese forms so appreciate the notes and the links to help me explore them more.
You found the perfect artwork to compliment your verse as well.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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This poem creates such beautiful imagery. I don't know much about the Japanese forms so appreciate the notes and the links to help me explore them more.
You found the perfect artwork to compliment your verse as well.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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WJ Debi
Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I love the creativity of this poem. The mysterious nymph, the sun attempting to play it cool but doesn't, the sprinkles of dew. Once again, a perfect package for our reading pleasure, not only that, but our....can't come up with the right word. I will continue to work on that, and let you know.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I love the creativity of this poem. The mysterious nymph, the sun attempting to play it cool but doesn't, the sprinkles of dew. Once again, a perfect package for our reading pleasure, not only that, but our....can't come up with the right word. I will continue to work on that, and let you know.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. I love the picture that showed the nymph as part of the tree. Your words showed the magik and determination of that person. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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What a fantastic tanka, Gypsy. I love the picture that showed the nymph as part of the tree. Your words showed the magik and determination of that person. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Aryr,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from JT traveller
The homonym of cool is positioned well in this poem. I appreciate the thought that has gone into it, using it both as a calming influence and a juxtaposition of the sun's heat.
A pleasure to read and another beautiful visual realisation.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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The homonym of cool is positioned well in this poem. I appreciate the thought that has gone into it, using it both as a calming influence and a juxtaposition of the sun's heat.
A pleasure to read and another beautiful visual realisation.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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You got it, JT, not everybody did. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
I loved this Poem. Full of poetic expression, it has that oomph that a short form work needs for expression in its heartbeat, and this has all of that innspades, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I loved this Poem. Full of poetic expression, it has that oomph that a short form work needs for expression in its heartbeat, and this has all of that innspades, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Roy
Thank you very much for your time and excellent 5 stars review!
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Most welcome
Comment from Gloria ....
A presentation here that I find most visually enchanting.
I very much enjoyed the subtle footnote of humour with the nymph who "fails to play it cool" underneath a radiant sun.
A most enjoyable read this evening.
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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A presentation here that I find most visually enchanting.
I very much enjoyed the subtle footnote of humour with the nymph who "fails to play it cool" underneath a radiant sun.
A most enjoyable read this evening.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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It was the sun who failed to be cool. LoL
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs