"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
You will get through this.
I try my best to resist but he ever comes for me with her sadistic beauty. (not sure 'he' works here)
Yes it's always and ever the same. (need comma after 'yes')
God I still vividly remember that sad but necessary day.
(need comma after 'God')
Yes in this Kyle gave the exact location I already knew in my Broken Heart. (need comma after 'yes')
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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You will get through this.
I try my best to resist but he ever comes for me with her sadistic beauty. (not sure 'he' works here)
Yes it's always and ever the same. (need comma after 'yes')
God I still vividly remember that sad but necessary day.
(need comma after 'God')
Yes in this Kyle gave the exact location I already knew in my Broken Heart. (need comma after 'yes')
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thanks for reviewing this one too. Barbara and pointing out a couple of minor grammar issues.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
My grandpa used to say things happen for a reason. It is not for us to question they why of the outcome.Miracle actually came about for others in dire need. If it wasn't for his passing they would never had received the gift of life from you and your son, Athena gift went on to save many and you should remember deep down in your gear it was the right thing to give to others the gift of life.A did you know a gift of life can save as many as seventy five people in one day. I say that is the greatest gift one can give another! God Bless!Life is fragile pass it on.
We'd.Feb.-22-2023.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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My grandpa used to say things happen for a reason. It is not for us to question they why of the outcome.Miracle actually came about for others in dire need. If it wasn't for his passing they would never had received the gift of life from you and your son, Athena gift went on to save many and you should remember deep down in your gear it was the right thing to give to others the gift of life.A did you know a gift of life can save as many as seventy five people in one day. I say that is the greatest gift one can give another! God Bless!Life is fragile pass it on.
We'd.Feb.-22-2023.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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75 Saved People.
My organs are registered in six hospitals.
Three in Philadelphia Green, Maryland including one at Hopkins.
Jefferson University Hospital in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania is highly interested in my kidney.
I'm left-handed to the left one stays inside of me.
Ask for the right?
To Hanks,
Doctor Ricky 1025
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
According to C.Lucas a Western novelist give me that title over 10 years ago.
He relinquished the title and then I believe his life got relinquished.
Comment from karenina
Dear Ricky... I held my breath as I read this, afraid to exhale for fear I would be overcome...
How does a parent get through this? Although, as an RN, I've seen this unfold in such a tragic way, I still struggle with the incongruity of a child passing before a parent.
Your pain is palpable...the descriptions so clear I nearly had to look away!
I agree. There is life after death...
I am certain of this.
Furthemore, I know through organ donations of my mother when she passed one person gained site, two were taken off dialysis as they each received a kidney, and one horrifically burned young man was saved by grafting her skin over his charred body.
I join you in pleading for all to consider organ donation.
What greater legacy?
Write on, my friend.
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Dear Ricky... I held my breath as I read this, afraid to exhale for fear I would be overcome...
How does a parent get through this? Although, as an RN, I've seen this unfold in such a tragic way, I still struggle with the incongruity of a child passing before a parent.
Your pain is palpable...the descriptions so clear I nearly had to look away!
I agree. There is life after death...
I am certain of this.
Furthemore, I know through organ donations of my mother when she passed one person gained site, two were taken off dialysis as they each received a kidney, and one horrifically burned young man was saved by grafting her skin over his charred body.
I join you in pleading for all to consider organ donation.
What greater legacy?
Write on, my friend.
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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One person can save 75 human beings with your body.
I'm registered in both Philadelphia and Maryland is a human organ donor.
Jefferson University Hospital in Philadelphia's highly interested in my kidney.
I used to want to do this to help a friend but he has done me bad.
Almost 80 been in complete renal failure now for a decade.
My right kidney will go to a stranger.
And my legacy will move forward along with my son's.
Soon....
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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I, also, am a registered organ donor. I encourage everyone I know to consider this as the ultimate gift of life. As an RN I saw the miracles of receiving donated organs. The letters I received telling me not the names, but the ages and circumstances of those who were blessed to receive my mom's organs are to this day a comfort.
