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A 1-6-1 Poem13 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
Your illustration displaying a person conquering a mountain is perfect. A metaphorically cal representation of attempting to better ourselves each and every day.
I love the layout, the rhyming nature and the font. A great 1-6-1.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Your illustration displaying a person conquering a mountain is perfect. A metaphorically cal representation of attempting to better ourselves each and every day.
I love the layout, the rhyming nature and the font. A great 1-6-1.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- an interesting challenge - 1/6/1- good picture presentation- reaching the top of the mountain- achieving your personal best- testing limits- good job- AP.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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I like your poem- an interesting challenge - 1/6/1- good picture presentation- reaching the top of the mountain- achieving your personal best- testing limits- good job- AP.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poem contest. The text is for sure a great size. I like also that it is centered and a color other than the typical black. Both make your message more prominent. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poem contest. The text is for sure a great size. I like also that it is centered and a color other than the typical black. Both make your message more prominent. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome,
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Your poem reminds me of astronauts and them wanting to reach the moon. The discoveries that they find are unbelievable. When the shuttle rises from NASA, it is off to the moon.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Your poem reminds me of astronauts and them wanting to reach the moon. The discoveries that they find are unbelievable. When the shuttle rises from NASA, it is off to the moon.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Mk Flood
Interesting phrasing. The only issue I have is you thanking AV(Annie) Murray for my work. It even displays the artists name from FAR. Maybe you changed it and forgot to change the artist name in the writer's notes. That's plausible. Just want to make sure you are aware who the illustrator really is. Wink.. MKFLOOD
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Interesting phrasing. The only issue I have is you thanking AV(Annie) Murray for my work. It even displays the artists name from FAR. Maybe you changed it and forgot to change the artist name in the writer's notes. That's plausible. Just want to make sure you are aware who the illustrator really is. Wink.. MKFLOOD
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, sorry my Freind I changed artwork at the last moment, many apologies, thanks for the heads up
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Comment from lyenochka
This form makes it hard to say something clearly but you have succeeded in giving an inspirational and motivational cheer in your 1-6-1. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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This form makes it hard to say something clearly but you have succeeded in giving an inspirational and motivational cheer in your 1-6-1. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine uplifting right about facing challenges and being tested by them, I enjoyed your 1-6-1 for the contest and wish you luck, this is a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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A fine uplifting right about facing challenges and being tested by them, I enjoyed your 1-6-1 for the contest and wish you luck, this is a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest.
Nice picture of top of the mountain. That's quite an achievement. Good syllables count, rhyme, and connection between lines.
I Would recommend it.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest.
Nice picture of top of the mountain. That's quite an achievement. Good syllables count, rhyme, and connection between lines.
I Would recommend it.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Ricky1024
"My" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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"My" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A very presented piece where text and image go very well together! The words are few but the implications endless. This is an easy motto to memorise and excellent one to practise!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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A very presented piece where text and image go very well together! The words are few but the implications endless. This is an easy motto to memorise and excellent one to practise!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much
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Best wishes!