Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I guess you don't want to be getting there "too late."
-You have a good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

thanks I will revise it now

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Feb-2023

You are welcome and have a new rating and review. I am glad you re did it.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is very well done and with a great message-though the prompt does require that all lines rhyme, you may need to revisit this one, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

thanks I will revise it

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet!

I enjoyed reading your wee poem but take note that all three lines must rhyme. ( wink)

Looking forward to reading you edited version!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

thanks i will revise it now