Love and bliss
missing a lost love9 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poem contest. The text is for sure a great size. The message is clearly stated. I like that the use of miss creates a double meaning poem. (a greeting or a loss) The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poem contest. The text is for sure a great size. The message is clearly stated. I like that the use of miss creates a double meaning poem. (a greeting or a loss) The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
I can relate to this poem, as I am sure many can. It's a beautiful sentiment, though it's very sad. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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I can relate to this poem, as I am sure many can. It's a beautiful sentiment, though it's very sad. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you jessi 🙂
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The words are romantic and sweet. Like the idea of feeling special about someone or something. It does not always have to be a person but even a special pet. Good Luck.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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The words are romantic and sweet. Like the idea of feeling special about someone or something. It does not always have to be a person but even a special pet. Good Luck.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much 🙂
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest. Excellent presentation. Good syllables count, rhyme, and connection between lines.
I Would recommend it.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest. Excellent presentation. Good syllables count, rhyme, and connection between lines.
I Would recommend it.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you Gypsy for the great review 🙂
Comment from prettybluebirds
The picture you added to your poem is absolutely gorgeous. You have taken the writing prompt and created lovely writing. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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The picture you added to your poem is absolutely gorgeous. You have taken the writing prompt and created lovely writing. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Tommy Francesco
With only six words, the poet manages to convey a depth of feeling that resonates with the reader. it captures the euphoria of being in love and sharing an intimate moment with someone special.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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With only six words, the poet manages to convey a depth of feeling that resonates with the reader. it captures the euphoria of being in love and sharing an intimate moment with someone special.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for exceptional review I am honoured 🙂
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you're welcome!
Comment from JT traveller
Truly romantic but concluding on a melancholy note. I appreciate the turn in your poem from engaging in the lovers'joy to feeling blue that the departed ways. So many emotions conveyed in so many words.
I love the layout too. It aids in making your words standout.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Truly romantic but concluding on a melancholy note. I appreciate the turn in your poem from engaging in the lovers'joy to feeling blue that the departed ways. So many emotions conveyed in so many words.
I love the layout too. It aids in making your words standout.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three very good rhymes
and a nice romantic theme that many should relate to.
Perfect picture and presentation.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three very good rhymes
and a nice romantic theme that many should relate to.
Perfect picture and presentation.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective descriptions and good rhymes.
-You do a good job showing how love
can be full of bliss.
-Your last line and the use of 'was' in the
previous line indicates it doesn't always last.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective descriptions and good rhymes.
-You do a good job showing how love
can be full of bliss.
-Your last line and the use of 'was' in the
previous line indicates it doesn't always last.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much
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You are welcome.