Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 poem contest. The text is an okay size. It could be larger with such a big visual. Larger it would be more prominent and would not be dwarfed by the visual. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023

Thank you and for the good luck!

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 22-Feb-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your picture plus words of your contest entry
paired perfectly, Mystery Author. The end rhymes
were an added bonus. Your message was loud and clear.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thanks!

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words rhyme and your message of the importance of prayer comes through clearly in your short poem. You did well with the 1-6-1 form and best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thank you so much!