Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

What a beautiful tribute to the woman you love. It sounds like you were both conquerors and the better for it.
Excellent quote to open the piece and catch the reader's attention. Coupled with the picture, I wondered what was coming next. It turned into a delightful story.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2023

Thank you very much.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I've read three or four of these now and this is definitely the best so far. It's a nice little piece. You could develop it a little more if you wanted given you still have some wordage to play with but nicely done.

GMG

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023

Thank you!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me smile here as you used the quote from Caesar to pursue the lady in apartment 312 and had success, a great entry for the contest, you entertained me here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thank you.

Comment from Sarah Das Gupta

Excellent

I like the introduction and the illustration which completely put the reader on the wrong track! You are expecting an ancient fable but you soon realise your mistake!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thank you.

reply by Sarah Das Gupta on 21-Feb-2023

Best wishes!