A Little Bit About Me
A brief bio.3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you have 8 votes now.
I enjoyed reading your poem.
I too love nature, having pets and arts. ( pyrography and dabbling in poetry)
My motto is live and let live.
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Ciao poet, you have 8 votes now.
I enjoyed reading your poem.
I too love nature, having pets and arts. ( pyrography and dabbling in poetry)
My motto is live and let live.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Well, now I am intrigued... who are you? This is a good entry for the Bio writing contest. You are friendly, creative, a busy bee and love the outdoors. Oh and animals too. A good friend and fun to hang out with I am guessing :-). Thank you for sharing you and best of luck in the competition.
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Well, now I am intrigued... who are you? This is a good entry for the Bio writing contest. You are friendly, creative, a busy bee and love the outdoors. Oh and animals too. A good friend and fun to hang out with I am guessing :-). Thank you for sharing you and best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Hello there, a fine attempt! You're rhyming is very good and of course the subject matter being yourself as the contest requires is good also.
I must confess to noticing some issues with the flow. If I might make a recommendation and a suggestion please have a look. Recommend reading the poem out allowed to ,yourself or have someone read it to for you. Suggest the below revisions. Perhaps read both versions out loud you may find improvement ie: " I seem to need very little rest" to "I seem to need little rest" "And I try to do things to my best" to "try to do things to my best " "and a helping hand if your upset" to "a helping hand if you're upset " your final works great! I hope these suggestions help...you may find a smoother flow. Thank you for your submission and good luck in the competition!
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Hello there, a fine attempt! You're rhyming is very good and of course the subject matter being yourself as the contest requires is good also.
I must confess to noticing some issues with the flow. If I might make a recommendation and a suggestion please have a look. Recommend reading the poem out allowed to ,yourself or have someone read it to for you. Suggest the below revisions. Perhaps read both versions out loud you may find improvement ie: " I seem to need very little rest" to "I seem to need little rest" "And I try to do things to my best" to "try to do things to my best " "and a helping hand if your upset" to "a helping hand if you're upset " your final works great! I hope these suggestions help...you may find a smoother flow. Thank you for your submission and good luck in the competition!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
