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Comment from JT traveller
Great one liner. I have never heard the term tender teeth prior to reading this.
A beating or a grounding. That was just the way it was in my household too. A whole world of expression in a mere single sentence.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Great one liner. I have never heard the term tender teeth prior to reading this.
A beating or a grounding. That was just the way it was in my household too. A whole world of expression in a mere single sentence.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind comments are very great compliment for which I am honored and thankful that you took the time to read my little poem thank you so much have a great day!
Comment from Brandon Clark
Awesome! Your whole presentation is great with that panther photo and the precise and excellent word choice and placement.
Best one line poem I've seen yet! Good luck in the contest!!
Brandon
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Awesome! Your whole presentation is great with that panther photo and the precise and excellent word choice and placement.
Best one line poem I've seen yet! Good luck in the contest!!
Brandon
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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That's so great I'm glad you think so! Thank you so much do I got this big stupid grin on my face. I'm glad you like a picture too I make most of my own pictures I'm thinking about maybe for doing on the eyeportion of the site. Anyway thank you again for taking the time to look at this and to provide such a wonderful review thanks have a great day!
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It is my pleasure!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Wow - that is one scary photo. A very colourful panther but still scary.
I found this an interesting entry for the - One Line Poem - contest. I did ponder on this part of the sentence - tender teeth. I am not sure how teeth can be tender in any scenario. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck in the competition.
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Wow - that is one scary photo. A very colourful panther but still scary.
I found this an interesting entry for the - One Line Poem - contest. I did ponder on this part of the sentence - tender teeth. I am not sure how teeth can be tender in any scenario. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck in the competition.
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Hi thank you so much for your review I really appreciate you taking the time to have a look what I mean by tender teeth Is that 1 parent or one authority is usually softer or kinder than the other. One might say we'll we are going to give consequences but less so And the other might say you're going to get it large and you're going to get your a** kicked... So you're in the job maybe you can get out.
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Yes, that makes more sense now. A bit like good cop, bad cop?
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Exactly
Comment from Kaiku
Thought maybe it was a rabbit in a young coyote's mouth ð???. Good one-liner that offers an opportunity to come up with a number of reasons for the ultimate crushing blow. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thought maybe it was a rabbit in a young coyote's mouth ð???. Good one-liner that offers an opportunity to come up with a number of reasons for the ultimate crushing blow. Good luck.
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your review much appreciated and also the time you took to read it. I hope you have an awesome evening and I hope to chat with you again soon!
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Certainly
