Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

I love this acrostic poem you have penned for the word Snowflakes. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the picture you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thank you for taking the time to read and for the six star review. Appreciated.

reply by Teri7 on 21-Feb-2023

You are so welcome!!!

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Creatively written poem. I wanted it to continue. Telling me of the melting snowman as his carrot nose, buttoned eyes, and twig limbs fell off. That's just me. Your poem evoke so many memories for me. What a fun write. Well done.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thanks for the read and the suggestions. Like them.

Comment from Allezw2

Excellent

Master Anon,
Evocative, though a bit wordy in my view. Poetry is best when the fewest possible words are used to convey a thought.
Evocative though, remembering my own days in high country winters; when kids are tossed out of the house to play in the snow and preserve parent's sanity.
Nicely done.
Live long and write well,
Fantasist

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thanks for the suggestions. Wanted to paint a picture, next time I will use less words.