Shattered
Stupidity ends in destruction17 total reviews
Comment from Charlie Shine
Very cleverly written.
Makes a very good read.
Nice work.
Charlie.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Very cleverly written.
Makes a very good read.
Nice work.
Charlie.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hi Charlie, Thanks for reading; always idiots. K xx
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an excellent loop poem. It tells of the devastation to your country through stupidity in a loop which is quite a feat, to say the least. I think you have the loop poem down and it doesn't matter to me whether it rhymes or not because it tells a story that needs to be told. I applaud your speaking out on the needless firestarters in your land down under.
Jesse
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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This is an excellent loop poem. It tells of the devastation to your country through stupidity in a loop which is quite a feat, to say the least. I think you have the loop poem down and it doesn't matter to me whether it rhymes or not because it tells a story that needs to be told. I applaud your speaking out on the needless firestarters in your land down under.
Jesse
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hi Jessie, Thanks for reading; always be idiots. K xx
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I suppose there will always be idiots.
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Arsonists are a' plenty, mainly drunk teenagers. K xx
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How sad!
Comment from dellsworthpoet
This poem is laden with the horror of interrupted rain patterns. The words are jarring and the repetitive nature of the form stresses the continuing cycle. The flow is good. The poem stays in form and stays on point.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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This poem is laden with the horror of interrupted rain patterns. The words are jarring and the repetitive nature of the form stresses the continuing cycle. The flow is good. The poem stays in form and stays on point.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hello friend, Thanks for reading. Our country is a land of many moods. K xx
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You are welcome. Sometimes I think Ma Nature is getting moodier recently.
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Mother Nature has had enough of humans digging coal and using her for fortunes to be made like gold. She is a gift to be revered. Kxx
Comment from JT traveller
Hello Aussie. A fantastic poem with a clear message. I can sense the resentment in your words. Australian weather has become crazy in recent years.
A poem that was powerful and resonated with me.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hello Aussie. A fantastic poem with a clear message. I can sense the resentment in your words. Australian weather has become crazy in recent years.
A poem that was powerful and resonated with me.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hello JT, Yes, we live in a land of many moods and idiot people throwing glass bottles. K xx
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Haha. Yes we do! I spend most of my time outside Australia at present. Have a great day. Jacqueline 😊🇦🇺
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent, meaningful and informative poem, about our bushfires - and the stupidity of some people who cause them and associated suffering. My only suggestion is a larger font. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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An excellent, meaningful and informative poem, about our bushfires - and the stupidity of some people who cause them and associated suffering. My only suggestion is a larger font. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Yep, I wish I had of stayed in Sydney. Everything grows monstrous here in Queensland! Thank you Wendy. K xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, I am so sorry you have fires again. Is it the hot weather causing them? Or have they been started by arsonists? Your poem is powerful and also sad as there will be loss of human life and animal life, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Oh my goodness, I am so sorry you have fires again. Is it the hot weather causing them? Or have they been started by arsonists? Your poem is powerful and also sad as there will be loss of human life and animal life, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Oz is a bossy lady, one minute floods, next bushfires. Yes, we are in the bushfire season and have been backburning before winter. Many have been arson attacks. Parts of Queensland are under water with flash flooding; a country of many moods. Thank you for reading friend. K xx
Comment from LJbutterfly
There are those who claim global warming causes fires. Well, careless people also cause fires. Your poem adequately details all the destruction to land and helpless animals because of reckless people. Your loop poetry is rich in imagery and detail. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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There are those who claim global warming causes fires. Well, careless people also cause fires. Your poem adequately details all the destruction to land and helpless animals because of reckless people. Your loop poetry is rich in imagery and detail. Thank you for sharing your talent.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hello my friend. Many thanks for reading. Oz is a country of many moods, we fight fires and in another part of the land, fight floods. K xx
