Shattered
Stupidity ends in destruction17 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kace, kids today have nothing else
to do...but cause trouble...this is
a whole new generation sweet girl...
my heart goes out to the wildlife...
these kids can be so heartless...
and even not rhyming my sweet friend...
it's a great Loop poem...
I love your poem...and the picture says it all...
very well written sweetie pie...
love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Hi Kace, kids today have nothing else
to do...but cause trouble...this is
a whole new generation sweet girl...
my heart goes out to the wildlife...
these kids can be so heartless...
and even not rhyming my sweet friend...
it's a great Loop poem...
I love your poem...and the picture says it all...
very well written sweetie pie...
love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Bless your cotton socks. Thanks for reading my friend. We live in a new world that just gets worse.
love, Kace.
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soooooooo welcome my sweet friend...love xxoo
Comment from Sally Law
I'm so sorry, dear Aussie. Prayers for you now. The foolish behavior you mentioned isn't helping. I'm praying for them too. Their killing themselves and their posterity. An urgent poem in loop form.
All my best,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I'm so sorry, dear Aussie. Prayers for you now. The foolish behavior you mentioned isn't helping. I'm praying for them too. Their killing themselves and their posterity. An urgent poem in loop form.
All my best,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Hi Sal, Arsonists are many in this country. Young people with nothing better to do. Thank you for reading. Hugs, Kay xx
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Most welcome! Thinking and praying for you, Kay. Sal XOs
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good poem in the loop format. I am not a big fan of the loop format because to listen to it. It gets a little confusing but you have done it well. And I know you say you like doing them so I say, keep riding, because there is a store that you can tell even with the loot format. The story is there. Patricia.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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This is a very good poem in the loop format. I am not a big fan of the loop format because to listen to it. It gets a little confusing but you have done it well. And I know you say you like doing them so I say, keep riding, because there is a store that you can tell even with the loot format. The story is there. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Hi Patricia, Many thanks for listening to the story. You will enjoy my next one about a bushranger. Blessings my friend. Kay xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You can fix a lot of things bit not stupidity. You did a great
job, Aussie, with this sad, sad poem. The story told was even
sadder when one remembers all the people, properties, and
animals lost. The color scheme was perfect. Your words flowed
smoothly to tell of this devastation all because of the stupidity
of those who should know better.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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You can fix a lot of things bit not stupidity. You did a great
job, Aussie, with this sad, sad poem. The story told was even
sadder when one remembers all the people, properties, and
animals lost. The color scheme was perfect. Your words flowed
smoothly to tell of this devastation all because of the stupidity
of those who should know better.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Hello Jan, Thanks for reading. Unfortunately, this is a common occurrence by drunken youths. Loved your poem about the statue of Liberty. K xx
Comment from BethShelby
This poem tells a sad tale of how fire starts in parched land. In this case the glass reflecting from sun can be magnified to poem of starting a fire that can't be quenched. It was once fertile land. Animal die and the land become worthless.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This poem tells a sad tale of how fire starts in parched land. In this case the glass reflecting from sun can be magnified to poem of starting a fire that can't be quenched. It was once fertile land. Animal die and the land become worthless.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Hi Beth, Thanks for reading; stupid people start bushfires. K xx
Comment from mermaids
Your words capture a devastating situation. Sorry to hear that the fires have started. Prayers sent for people and animals. You poem is important because it brings to life the impact of wildfires and the destruction and loss of life they cause.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Your words capture a devastating situation. Sorry to hear that the fires have started. Prayers sent for people and animals. You poem is important because it brings to life the impact of wildfires and the destruction and loss of life they cause.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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We are used to our land of many moods. Arsonists are 'a plenty. At least this is the last week of summer! It's been a real corker. Love, Kay.
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Here in England, we don't have anything like the regular bushfires that you have. I learnt in the 2020 fires that eucalyptus trees are flammable and will explode. Your Loop poem is well-crafted and brings the fires to our attention.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Here in England, we don't have anything like the regular bushfires that you have. I learnt in the 2020 fires that eucalyptus trees are flammable and will explode. Your Loop poem is well-crafted and brings the fires to our attention.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Yes, the oil in the trees is highly flammable. Americans have found that out, much to their loss.
Thanks for reading Sarah. K xx
Comment from June Sargent
It is frustrating when tragedy can be prevented if only people would act responsibly. Tossing beer bottles into bushes is stupid and will ultimately cause death and destruction. Unfortunately, not everyone has a conscience.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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It is frustrating when tragedy can be prevented if only people would act responsibly. Tossing beer bottles into bushes is stupid and will ultimately cause death and destruction. Unfortunately, not everyone has a conscience.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thanks for reading my friend. K xx
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic picture, it really set the mood, Kay. I agree with your words, only stupidity could cause this much devastation. This was an abomination. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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What a fantastic picture, it really set the mood, Kay. I agree with your words, only stupidity could cause this much devastation. This was an abomination. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hello my friend. There will always be idiots. K xx
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You are welcome, Kay. Yeppers, idiots.
Comment from w.j.debi
Excellent loop poem on a timely subject. Each line communicates a clear concept.
The fires have caused such devastation in the past. I hope this year is not as bad and that rains come in reasonable amounts to feed the ground instead of flooding it.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Excellent loop poem on a timely subject. Each line communicates a clear concept.
The fires have caused such devastation in the past. I hope this year is not as bad and that rains come in reasonable amounts to feed the ground instead of flooding it.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hello W.J. Thanks for reading this; never ending story. K xx
