Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Interesting that you wrote about fairies and this poem is very creative. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Nice job! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thank you, Raul, for reading and reviewing my fairy poetry. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you also for all the stars.
May fairies brighten your tomorrow?

Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi leather,
When I was a kid, fairies were very real. We searched for them among the fireflies at night. We called them pixies. Of course, we never found one. But it was fun looking. And just think, they were watching us when we weren't watching. That's so magical.

You managed a nice entry for the ABC Poetry contest, and I wish you Good Luck!
It doesn't rhyme, but my favorite line is
"Fairies watch you when you aren't watching."

Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Hi, Kimbob. I enjoyed hearing how you searched for pixies (fairies) among the fireflies as a kid. That had to be fun.
I also enjoyed getting your review and all the stars--and hearing which line was your favorite. Thanks again for everything.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Wonderful poem about fairies. Excellent entry for the ABC Poetry Contest. Its not easy to make an abc poem flow. Yours is not forced.

I love the imagery and presentation.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Hi, Gypsy. Thanks so much for your review and all the stars. I appreciate your letting me know that I hit the mark by having the poem flow smoothly--that's helpful to me.
May the fairies cross your path.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The reading of the author's words was delightful. The poem was engaging, descriptive and creative! The author's words are sweet, interesting and were fun to read. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments the words and theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Hello, Harmony. Thank you so much for reviewing my ABC poem--also for all the stars and comments.
The artwork suited the poem perfectly, and I'm grateful to the artist.
May fairies watch over you?

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Your ABC poem was fun and descriptive. I especially liked your rhymes, even though they weren't necessary. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Hi, Jessi. Thank you for taking the time to review and let me know the rhymes worked--I appreciate all the stars and the good wishes.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

An excellent entry in this poetry contest my friend, you've done a great job with furthering the cause of fairies with this great entry in this ABC contest. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thank you, Roy, for your kind review, comments, and good wishes. I am so glad I have furthered fairies' cause- they deserve a little attention.
Thanks as always for the blessings.

reply by royowen on 20-Feb-2023

Of course they do.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

I love fairy tales so was drawn to your poem about them and how they are hiding just out of sight. And watching us too. Oh, what are they up to?
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my ABC poem--and for all those stars and good wishes!
I, too, love fairy tales.
May the fairies brighten your path today.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

Very nice presentation here with all the color coordination going on. Very pretty!

I will have to keep my eyes open for those tiny creatures while I'm working in my flower beds today:-)

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thanks, Pam, for your review, all the stars, and the comments.
Your comment about the presentation helps me understand how much visuals can enhance a submission.
Yes, watch for fairies while you work in the flower beds--that's prime real estate.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation.
-I like the font choice, too.
-You did a good job with the poem and topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job of describing their
surroundings and their special powers.
-I like the line about "Illusion and shape-shifting."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Your review was quite detailed and helpful. I liked that you mentioned the line you liked the most. Thanks so much for the review, all the stars, and the good wishes.

reply by Pam (respa) on 20-Feb-2023

You are very welcome. I appreciate your reply.

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Very nice ABC poem, Leather. I have always wondered if fairies hang around in the winter. I never thought that when I get that feeling that someone is watching me, it is probably fairies.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Paul, you are a 'deep thinker.' I know that because you are the only person who has wondered about fairies in the winter--excellent question.
Thanks so much for the review and all those stars.