Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Hi Jessica! For being here for such a short time, you are making your mark! And I couldn't be more happy for you! I didn't mind taking second to one so deserving as this was. You took on a wonderful topic, that so many of us teachers are happy to see! Awesome job, my sweet friend! You should be proud of yourself, as I know I am for you!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023

I can?t even tell you how much your comment means to me, Debi! I?ve been tied up most of today/tonight- completely unaware that I had even won. I am so delighted to have learned it from your review.. I honestly couldn?t have picked a better way to find out about my very first, first place!!! Your writing has been an inspiration to me right from the start. And the kindness you've shown me in addition to that just makes you all the more inspiring!! I'm so humbled by your encouragement and touched by your well wishes. Placing second to you was an honor in itself- So this is overwhelming! lol
I am so very grateful to you- and for you! <3 <3

reply by Debi Pick Marquette on 24-Feb-2023

😘🤗

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I am loving this inspired Tyburn poem. Beautifully penned and illustrated too with an important word within.

Sending along my very best as always, and my very best in the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thank you, Sally! I appreciate your kind words. :)

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

I don't know anything about a Tyburn poem. But I do think you have written an excellent poem. I love the flow, rhythm, and message. I think it will be a good entry for this prompt. Well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023

Thank you, Terry! I really appreciate that.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Nice poem in honor of teachers. The presentation is good too.

The way you incorporated the words for the poem as necessary for the contest seem a little forced.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thanks for your feedback! :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is one of the best tyburn poems I've ever seen my friend, the rhyming is fist class, and it's doing a sterling job when it comes to putting encouragement and praise in the right place. Good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me!!

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

What an excellent message and a tribute to teachers whether they be school teachers or others who take the time to help us grow. This is an interesting form and you've excelled at it.
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

This is so true and I too commend all teachers who toil and deal with students every day of the week and never forget a student's face while they learn the teachings that they need to know to grow up and be outstanding citizens. Thank you for showing appreciation for all the teachers.
Jesse

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

I appreciate that, thanks so much! :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Tyburns are very hard to write and make sense but you succeeded and you gave us an important message - to appreciate those who reach out and teach our youth the truth. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023

Thank you so much! :)

Comment from Brandon Clark

Excellent

You've got a very worthy contest entry in this. It is excellent and conveys the message clearly and in so few words and syllables not to mention.

Great job and best of luck in the contest!
Brandon

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023

Thank you, I really appreciate that!

Comment from jacquelyn popp

Excellent

Great poem, nicely done. I loved reading it, and to me it describes a lot of what teachers do for youth. All of the words that you used describe teachers in the different way that they impact lives. Great photo that goes well with your poem. Nicely done, with using the writing prompt for your poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023

Thank you very much!