Busy Bob's Side Jobs
He lived off his tips, but poem tells why he didn't have to58 total reviews
Comment from Ida T. Johnson
You really went above and beyond the standard ABC structure by also having the last words of each line in this format- and in rhyme! Very creative and well-done! Good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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You really went above and beyond the standard ABC structure by also having the last words of each line in this format- and in rhyme! Very creative and well-done! Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Ida, I cannot thank you enough for your incredible review, lovely comments and gift of six stars. You can't know how very much I appreciate it. Thank you again my dear friend.
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my pleasure!
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HUGS and thanks again!
Comment from lyenochka
Those are the best kind of stories! Great job in not only making your acrostic poem at the start of each line but also at the end of each line! Hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Those are the best kind of stories! Great job in not only making your acrostic poem at the start of each line but also at the end of each line! Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hi there Helen. Thanks so much for the kind words for my A B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the stor make sense. Thanks again for your very kind comments, my dear friend
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem is a fun read, because not only do the first words go in alphabetical order, but the last word of each line does the same thing. I'm not sure who the Bob was from the original story you heard of, but nice job re-telling the account. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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This poem is a fun read, because not only do the first words go in alphabetical order, but the last word of each line does the same thing. I'm not sure who the Bob was from the original story you heard of, but nice job re-telling the account. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hi there Crystie. Thanks so much for the kind words for my A B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the story make sense. Thanks again for your very kind comments, my dear friend
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the ABC poetry contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. Thank goodness for people like Bob.
The visual is okay but is against copyright laws because the name of the company is stamped on it. It is removed when the license is purchased. To avoid this problem. Type Free images of _________ in your search engine. In the blank put what you are looking for. Download it to your computer and upload it here on the poetry composing page. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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This is a good entry to the ABC poetry contest. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand. Thank goodness for people like Bob.
The visual is okay but is against copyright laws because the name of the company is stamped on it. It is removed when the license is purchased. To avoid this problem. Type Free images of _________ in your search engine. In the blank put what you are looking for. Download it to your computer and upload it here on the poetry composing page. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thanks so much Sandra for your kind comments. Actually had purchased by paying to use off their site. Huh, didn't realize they didn't remove but will check it out! Thanks again my friend!
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You are welcome.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
powerful and moving poem talking about what one man can do to change the world and make it a better world for us all. I like the image you chose for your picture
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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powerful and moving poem talking about what one man can do to change the world and make it a better world for us all. I like the image you chose for your picture
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hi there Jake. Thanks so much for the kind words for my A B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the stor make sense. Thanks again for your very kind comments, my dear friend
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi author, great contest entry. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. I like how the beginning word, and the ending word, of each line started with the same letter. Of special note:
Every cent of all his millions, gave to kids from Everywhere
(I would bet the bank that that Busy Bob remained an anonymous donor.)
Well done; well said. Excellent photo choice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hi author, great contest entry. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. I like how the beginning word, and the ending word, of each line started with the same letter. Of special note:
Every cent of all his millions, gave to kids from Everywhere
(I would bet the bank that that Busy Bob remained an anonymous donor.)
Well done; well said. Excellent photo choice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Hi there Margaret. Thanks so much for the kind words for my A B C D E poem. It was fun adding the challenge of monorhyme, and add the last word too with the consecutive letter, as well as beginning and still make the stor make sense. Thanks again for the awesome review and for your generous bonus stars! Much appreciated, my dear friend
Comment from Thesis
A great story in few words. You show compassion and caring for others, and a selfless man giving back to what he believes in. His further generosity shown at the end.
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A great story in few words. You show compassion and caring for others, and a selfless man giving back to what he believes in. His further generosity shown at the end.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
Comment from Jim Wile
This is an excellent poem about an impressive, selfless guy. I love the way you not only started each line in alphabetical order, but ended them as well. Well done!
2 minor suggestions to improve the iambic meter:
Instead of: "Big Bob picking up garbage, on the beaches in Bel~Air"
try this: "Big Bob picked up the garbage, on the beaches in Bel~Air"
Also, instead of: "Did not think of himself, only the children in Despair"
try this: "Did not think of himself, but just the children in Despair"
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This is an excellent poem about an impressive, selfless guy. I love the way you not only started each line in alphabetical order, but ended them as well. Well done!
2 minor suggestions to improve the iambic meter:
Instead of: "Big Bob picking up garbage, on the beaches in Bel~Air"
try this: "Big Bob picked up the garbage, on the beaches in Bel~Air"
Also, instead of: "Did not think of himself, only the children in Despair"
try this: "Did not think of himself, but just the children in Despair"
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Hi Jim, I am kinda behind on my reviews, but nevertheless still trying to let you know how much I appreciate you. I have a feeling I have changed those things for the better already, but still appreciate you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What a nice, warm story. If Bob is still alive, he should be roaming the streets of L.A., or San Fran cleaning up those needles left by the panhandling masses.
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What a nice, warm story. If Bob is still alive, he should be roaming the streets of L.A., or San Fran cleaning up those needles left by the panhandling masses.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
Comment from rjuselius
This is truly an inspirational piece of poetry dear anonymous! I think you have definately the chord. Children are innocent and should never be Hurt.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This is truly an inspirational piece of poetry dear anonymous! I think you have definately the chord. Children are innocent and should never be Hurt.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Hi Rebecca, so sorry this took so long, but for A few days ..% thank you so much for your lovely review and comments. I appreciate the gift of six stars so very much, my friends
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
