Ancient Art of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Heart Asunder"A compilation of poems
18 total reviews
Comment from Maria Millsaps
You make it look easy. There is a lot implied in the poem. And you managed to follow the pattern and worked through with intentions. Nice job and good luck.
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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You make it look easy. There is a lot implied in the poem. And you managed to follow the pattern and worked through with intentions. Nice job and good luck.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you Maria for your review and for your comments! I also appreciate you stopping by to read especially for your time! It's very much appreciated.
I hope your day is grand!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a good loop poem full of colorful words and imagery that supports its theme. The image works through support your word. Good writing and Best wishes!
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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This is a good loop poem full of colorful words and imagery that supports its theme. The image works through support your word. Good writing and Best wishes!
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you so much Alexandra. I appreciate your comment and dropping by and having a read Anything that said or shared as equally important! Thanks again for your time always welcome here have a great day!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Oooooo...
This is a lovely piece , my friend.
Great photograph, I like the background and font chosen very well nicely done!
- Kerry
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Oooooo...
This is a lovely piece , my friend.
Great photograph, I like the background and font chosen very well nicely done!
- Kerry
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you Carrie I'm glad you'd like it. I'm glad when anyone likes it. I justpecially yourself doing such a challenge with writers always challenge your writer's opinions matter to me and I really appreciate yours. Like it and I hope that uh we're having a great day thank you again
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Stunning presentation! You always know when it's a good loop when you don't realise it is and, although you found it a challenge, you seem to have successfully mastered it. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Stunning presentation! You always know when it's a good loop when you don't realise it is and, although you found it a challenge, you seem to have successfully mastered it. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Thank you Debbie I always appreciate your re time as well and you're comments always welcome here and I feel the need to express some humor and that is. What did one ocean say to the other? Nothing they just waved. Lol Hope you're having a great day!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This was a good loop poem that fit the requirements. I thought the last line was particularly effective and even lyrical. But the first part definitely describes something that is no longer fully functioning as a relationship. Nice post.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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This was a good loop poem that fit the requirements. I thought the last line was particularly effective and even lyrical. But the first part definitely describes something that is no longer fully functioning as a relationship. Nice post.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2023
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Christie thank you so much for your review!! I'm glad you liked it I appreciate your comments and your time as always! Now it's fine for some humor what did one ocean say to the other? Nothing they just waved...lol. Thank you again I hope you have a great day!
Comment from Eternal Muse
A nice rendition of the contest. I never tried to write a Loop, though one of these days I'd probably venture into it.
An amazing artistic presentation, imagery and visuals. Your words speak volumes.
The artwork is stunning. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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A nice rendition of the contest. I never tried to write a Loop, though one of these days I'd probably venture into it.
An amazing artistic presentation, imagery and visuals. Your words speak volumes.
The artwork is stunning. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review i'm glad you're enjoying my poem and the picture too!
Has ever I? Appreciate ever reviews of privacy and take them all very seriously. Thank you very much for your time and for your insight hope you have a great day!
Comment from Chrissy710
HI Lea, Your imaginative Loop poem, was an interesting take on Love gone wrong. And your word usage give food for thought. Overall a nice presentation and well done with this post for this contest Good luck
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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HI Lea, Your imaginative Loop poem, was an interesting take on Love gone wrong. And your word usage give food for thought. Overall a nice presentation and well done with this post for this contest Good luck
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much crush I appreciate your comments and your well wishes. I'm glad you liked it. It was an interesting one to write trying to get it all the come together. For me a reflex of woman who says enough is enough fun done with this love thing. I appreciate your kind words your review your tongue it's all very valuable to me. Thank you Chris have a great evening!
Comment from lyenochka
Intriguing poem about an elusive woman who allures but is hard to keep connect with. You met the challenging loop poem requirements perfectly! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Intriguing poem about an elusive woman who allures but is hard to keep connect with. You met the challenging loop poem requirements perfectly! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for that I appreciate your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I would appreciate any comments that I'm on my way and any suggestions for change. I'm happy to receive that too thank you for your time hope you have a great day!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A loop is not easy to write. I wrote one recently, too, and when I came to the rhyming part, it was a head thinker. Could you possibly make the print not so faded looking. Other than that, it is amazing.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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A loop is not easy to write. I wrote one recently, too, and when I came to the rhyming part, it was a head thinker. Could you possibly make the print not so faded looking. Other than that, it is amazing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Absolutely thank you Rosemary for your kind review and for your suggestion I'll definitely do that. I thank you for your time and insight its reatly appreciated.
Yes loop poems are definitely different and glad you like it!
Comment from shelley kaye
i like that the last line loops back around to the first word bring it full circle
smooth flow
imagistic word choices
and a cool picture
one suggestion i have is maybe try a black background and a goldish font to blend in with the cool pic?
just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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i like that the last line loops back around to the first word bring it full circle
smooth flow
imagistic word choices
and a cool picture
one suggestion i have is maybe try a black background and a goldish font to blend in with the cool pic?
just a thought ;)
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Thank you shelly good idea I'll check that out for sure! I'm glad you like to pick in the poem. It was happy for your time and for your insight And for your review I especially appreciate thank you and have a great day!
