Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm sorry that you went through all that trouble with this woman. I guess your poem is a biography from her point of view. It sounds like she is really in need of mental health care.
Typo in your notes:
I helped an indigenate woman (indigent)

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023

Thanks Ivenochka for your review and grammar comment.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Some folk can't be helped and they can be lying to themselves to the point that they think they're normal, and everyone else is off the planet, beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023

Thanks Roy and well noted.
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 17-Feb-2023

Well done

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this with us. I'm sure this will eventually be settled. I'm sure not soon enought.

An out came I in a cauldron of bloody churn. (And out)

Ready to take me away and in case me that night. (and encase me)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023

I thank you for the corrections, as I messed up on the one sentence myself.
I talk in most of my writings and then edit them through my phone afterwards.
Sometimes the phone messes up.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Rebecca Roberts1

Excellent

There are so many interesting people in this world, and some are even fun.
Your little lady is not only interesting but entertaining as well as crazy.
I enjoy reading your work.
Nice job.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023

My first off let me make it clear. She's not a lady.
And secondly, she is definitely insane and crazy.
The judge will learn this in superior court on March 8th.
Note: There will be a follow-up.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky

reply by Rebecca Roberts1 on 17-Feb-2023

Wow! How did I miss that?