Be Wee With Bea Part 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "A Conflicting Interruption"Third in a series is quite sad in the beginning.
14 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This was so poignant.... It evoked several feelings within me as I am a mother and was left by a mother. So a subject close to my heart. I can also see lessons and morals to be learned within your work. Not least of which compassion becoming so rare in the world it's like gold hard to find. It is a very enjoyable weed well put together with a definite storyline I was interested in. I thank you very much for your submission and look forward to reading your next installment hope you have a great day!!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This was so poignant.... It evoked several feelings within me as I am a mother and was left by a mother. So a subject close to my heart. I can also see lessons and morals to be learned within your work. Not least of which compassion becoming so rare in the world it's like gold hard to find. It is a very enjoyable weed well put together with a definite storyline I was interested in. I thank you very much for your submission and look forward to reading your next installment hope you have a great day!!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your exceptional review. If you want to read the previous chapters feel free & no need for any reviews. Just enjoy.
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Thank you Liz I will!"have a great night,!
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Wonderful...enjoy...as you study Bea, you'll know more about me...Bea is an allegorical me
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OK good to know thanks very much I look forward to your next submission!
Comment from papa55mike
It's nice when a friend you never saw before reaches out a hand to help. We, people, need to do more of the same thing. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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It's nice when a friend you never saw before reaches out a hand to help. We, people, need to do more of the same thing. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your book!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Comment from Julie G1
Well done. This tale conveys an intriguing story, inviting a reader to keep reading more chapters. The choice of characters and imagery is effectively handled. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Well done. This tale conveys an intriguing story, inviting a reader to keep reading more chapters. The choice of characters and imagery is effectively handled. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. If you want to read the previous chapters feel free & no need for any reviews. Just enjoy.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
In the very top line "Bea??s packing to move to Dooliea??s was interrupted" - the htlm needs to be edited out.
Seemed Zoe was being moved around a lot, especially for a youngster.
Her attitude about not eating, and the reason for her inappropriate behavior, would cause her grief.
Appears quite a predicament has arisen. Now, what is she to do?
Ending lends to making reader curious as to what occurs next.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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In the very top line "Bea??s packing to move to Dooliea??s was interrupted" - the htlm needs to be edited out.
Seemed Zoe was being moved around a lot, especially for a youngster.
Her attitude about not eating, and the reason for her inappropriate behavior, would cause her grief.
Appears quite a predicament has arisen. Now, what is she to do?
Ending lends to making reader curious as to what occurs next.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your positive review. I'm glad you are enjoying it
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful continuation chapter, Liz. It was absolutely phenomenal. The Buddy bear, Bea, Doolie and Sweet Puppy were somewhat in a dilemma, they had to figure all this out. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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This was a wonderful continuation chapter, Liz. It was absolutely phenomenal. The Buddy bear, Bea, Doolie and Sweet Puppy were somewhat in a dilemma, they had to figure all this out. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n hugs!!!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are taken in.
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You are so welcome, Liz.
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***smile***
Comment from JT traveller
Your introductory sentence has been changed by FS. It does this to me all the time.
Poor Zoe, feeling so unhappy. I am glad Stormy and Buddy Bear were there to support her.
I do hope Sweet Puppy will be okay.
A lovely read that any child would adore. Well done. You have woven a magical tale.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Your introductory sentence has been changed by FS. It does this to me all the time.
Poor Zoe, feeling so unhappy. I am glad Stormy and Buddy Bear were there to support her.
I do hope Sweet Puppy will be okay.
A lovely read that any child would adore. Well done. You have woven a magical tale.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. If you want to read the previous chapters feel free to read them without any need for a review. Just enjoy.
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Thx Liz. Have a great day. Jacqueline 😊
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***warm smile***
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Thankyou. Jacqueline 😊
Comment from Nicki Nance
I can't imagine a child or adult who would not be engaged by these rich characters. You capture their inner experiences in depth and their actions in detail. Excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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I can't imagine a child or adult who would not be engaged by these rich characters. You capture their inner experiences in depth and their actions in detail. Excellent.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your supportive review. I'm glad you appreciate ot. If you want to read any of the previous chapters, feel free to read them with no need to do any reviews. Just enjoy.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I find this easier to follow with the cast of characters listed, although you don't have the new character listed. Reading this in parts with days in between doesn't make it easy to remember. I would think all the moving around from place to place would be hard on the ones least able to deal with changes.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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I find this easier to follow with the cast of characters listed, although you don't have the new character listed. Reading this in parts with days in between doesn't make it easy to remember. I would think all the moving around from place to place would be hard on the ones least able to deal with changes.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. This is an artificial situation as you noted. I sometimes actually have to go back & read the previous chapter to remember who & what is going on. I'm not sure who I forgot to include in the cast of characters.
Comment from eliz100
I enjoyed reading your children's story. You moved the story along nicely. I look forward to the next installment. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed reading your children's story. You moved the story along nicely. I look forward to the next installment. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your appreciative review. I'm glad it has you involved.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can understand why Bea is so conflicted. I'm curious about the creature. I can't wait until it's completely revealed. You are doing upper elementary children a service by writing this.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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I can understand why Bea is so conflicted. I'm curious about the creature. I can't wait until it's completely revealed. You are doing upper elementary children a service by writing this.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your involved review. Make sure you review the cast of characters to get a clue.
