lipstick on my collar
Katauta-like 4-6-5 (on my collar)3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
What a stunning portrait of Raquel Welch. I was so sorry to hear of her passing. More than that, I had a handyman here today, in his late sixties...
He seemed so morose! I finally asked him what was troubling him so.
"Did you hear Raquell Welch died?" ~ he said.
Oh my gosh.
I could see his adolescent dreams in his eyes!
Very nice, Mark.
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
What a stunning portrait of Raquel Welch. I was so sorry to hear of her passing. More than that, I had a handyman here today, in his late sixties...
He seemed so morose! I finally asked him what was troubling him so.
"Did you hear Raquell Welch died?" ~ he said.
Oh my gosh.
I could see his adolescent dreams in his eyes!
Very nice, Mark.
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thanks for that sidelight story Karen. She certainly was a beautiful and sexy actor. To be honest, I wrote the poem first. Then I looked for a FanArt illustration to pair with it. I was lucky to find her image.
Mark
Mark
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It's a dignified and refreshing change from the "poster" image I've seen about ten thousand times in the past three days!
Comment from Nicki Nance
You said it all in such a few words. The lady in the well chosen picture is as ethereal as the lingering scent of perfume. This poem is really well done.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
You said it all in such a few words. The lady in the well chosen picture is as ethereal as the lingering scent of perfume. This poem is really well done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thanks Nicki!
The illustration was a lucky find in FanArt. It was coincidental that her passing coincided with my post, which is typically three short lines.
Mark
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Is this 4-6-5 in tribute to Raquel Walsh? A beautiful lady.
I enjoyed the premise of this piece. I did ponder on the use of the word - her - twice in such a small space. And the word - scent - as that would refer to smell - lipstick would be more visual.
Just a suggestion:
She marks forever
Food for thought. :-) Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
Is this 4-6-5 in tribute to Raquel Walsh? A beautiful lady.
I enjoyed the premise of this piece. I did ponder on the use of the word - her - twice in such a small space. And the word - scent - as that would refer to smell - lipstick would be more visual.
Just a suggestion:
She marks forever
Food for thought. :-) Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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DD,
The verse came first. It was coincidental that I found a FanArt illustration that coincided with her passing. Your suggestion is a good one, but she was sexy so I will repeat ?her? ?. LOL
IMHO Often the ?scent? of a woman lingers on one?s clothes.
Mark