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lipstick on my collar

Katauta-like 4-6-5 (on my collar)

3 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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What a stunning portrait of Raquel Welch. I was so sorry to hear of her passing. More than that, I had a handyman here today, in his late sixties...

He seemed so morose! I finally asked him what was troubling him so.

"Did you hear Raquell Welch died?" ~ he said.

Oh my gosh.

I could see his adolescent dreams in his eyes!

Very nice, Mark.

Karenina


 Comment Written 17-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thanks for that sidelight story Karen. She certainly was a beautiful and sexy actor. To be honest, I wrote the poem first. Then I looked for a FanArt illustration to pair with it. I was lucky to find her image.

    Mark

    Mark
reply by karenina on 17-Feb-2023
    It's a dignified and refreshing change from the "poster" image I've seen about ten thousand times in the past three days!
Comment from Nicki Nance
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You said it all in such a few words. The lady in the well chosen picture is as ethereal as the lingering scent of perfume. This poem is really well done.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    Thanks Nicki!

    The illustration was a lucky find in FanArt. It was coincidental that her passing coincided with my post, which is typically three short lines.

    Mark
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Is this 4-6-5 in tribute to Raquel Walsh? A beautiful lady.

I enjoyed the premise of this piece. I did ponder on the use of the word - her - twice in such a small space. And the word - scent - as that would refer to smell - lipstick would be more visual.
Just a suggestion:

She marks forever

Food for thought. :-) Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
    DD,

    The verse came first. It was coincidental that I found a FanArt illustration that coincided with her passing. Your suggestion is a good one, but she was sexy so I will repeat ?her? ?. LOL

    IMHO Often the ?scent? of a woman lingers on one?s clothes.

    Mark