Taste of My Reality
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Comment from Logan Winsor
I liked the imagery in this poem. I found it interesting and thought-provoking. I noticed in the presentation that the last line kind of falls out of place beneath the picture and looks a bit disjointed. The text wraps around the image, so that's probably the cause. The image actually adds a lot to the poem, just the placement is a bit off.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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I liked the imagery in this poem. I found it interesting and thought-provoking. I noticed in the presentation that the last line kind of falls out of place beneath the picture and looks a bit disjointed. The text wraps around the image, so that's probably the cause. The image actually adds a lot to the poem, just the placement is a bit off.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Sorry you didn't seem to understand this. Logan.
I would suggest you reread it and then check the editor's notes. It'll make more sense.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory
Comment from country ranch writer
The sat be careful what you wish for my friend as a fool and his money soon part you still end up with none. Live and learn they say.
Nothing else to say on this subject. Good luck in the contest.
Thursday-Feb.-16-2023.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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The sat be careful what you wish for my friend as a fool and his money soon part you still end up with none. Live and learn they say.
Nothing else to say on this subject. Good luck in the contest.
Thursday-Feb.-16-2023.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thanks again for stopping by and reviewing this one.
Doctor Ricky
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your author's notes are very interesting. I enjoyed reading. I didn't see any way to improve this post. I dream in color, at the dreams I remember. I don't remember many. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Your author's notes are very interesting. I enjoyed reading. I didn't see any way to improve this post. I dream in color, at the dreams I remember. I don't remember many. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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I actually don't know whether I dream in color or black and white.
But my dreams sometimes are so crazy and cool I jot them down.
Doctor Ricky