One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
birds on a wire
look at the busy park --
people watching
We cannot help but notice that the birds notice us, and perhaps understand better than we do.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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birds on a wire
look at the busy park --
people watching
We cannot help but notice that the birds notice us, and perhaps understand better than we do.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Really like the overall presentation for this Haiku.
Of course, the reader can project if the birds are watching the people sitting (or strolling) or vice versa LOL
Mark
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Gypsy,
Really like the overall presentation for this Haiku.
Of course, the reader can project if the birds are watching the people sitting (or strolling) or vice versa LOL
Mark
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for reading my poem and the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is exactly what birds do, they are constantly watching us. Looking out for food being dropped and monitoring our behaviour constantly, I enjoyed your ambient write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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This is exactly what birds do, they are constantly watching us. Looking out for food being dropped and monitoring our behaviour constantly, I enjoyed your ambient write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for reading my poem and the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your well chosen words actively engage the readers imagination. For years I lived in a house that backed up to a wooded area. Hundreds of birds periodically perched on tree branches and quietly observed, like the birds spoken of in your poetry, and pictured. I love poetry and prose that makes me imagine.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Your well chosen words actively engage the readers imagination. For years I lived in a house that backed up to a wooded area. Hundreds of birds periodically perched on tree branches and quietly observed, like the birds spoken of in your poetry, and pictured. I love poetry and prose that makes me imagine.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for reading my poem and the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
A very nice Haiku.
I wonder what birds think of when they see us congregation down below. I bet they think we make overbearing chirping noises.
Thank you for this great poem. It made me think.
Blessings, Gypsy.
Cindy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Gypsy,
A very nice Haiku.
I wonder what birds think of when they see us congregation down below. I bet they think we make overbearing chirping noises.
Thank you for this great poem. It made me think.
Blessings, Gypsy.
Cindy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Cindy,
Thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
People are watching the birds and the birds are watching people. I have heard this line about birds on a wire in reference to the media. The media is like birds are on wire writing the same story with the same message. Once again you did a wonderful job.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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People are watching the birds and the birds are watching people. I have heard this line about birds on a wire in reference to the media. The media is like birds are on wire writing the same story with the same message. Once again you did a wonderful job.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
The picture or rather the dual picture was rather creative with the feather after the poem, Gypsy. I enjoyed the birds on a wire as well. Your words were also creative because they showed that the birds were 'people watching'. Great job. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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The picture or rather the dual picture was rather creative with the feather after the poem, Gypsy. I enjoyed the birds on a wire as well. Your words were also creative because they showed that the birds were 'people watching'. Great job. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
As always you've done a marvellous job with this post Gypsy. The birds on the wire is inspired with the coup de'etat of people watching, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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As always you've done a marvellous job with this post Gypsy. The birds on the wire is inspired with the coup de'etat of people watching, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, I am sure they do watch us from up there as we watch them from street level. A lovely observation haiku Gypsy and beautifully presented.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Yes, I am sure they do watch us from up there as we watch them from street level. A lovely observation haiku Gypsy and beautifully presented.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Birds of a feather, do flock together. The image reminded me of this quote. Lots of people do watch birds fly to and fro. Your poem is speaking about nature.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Birds of a feather, do flock together. The image reminded me of this quote. Lots of people do watch birds fly to and fro. Your poem is speaking about nature.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs