A Poetic Pause
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Balance "First Poems
4 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I suspect you are a deep thinker. (smile)
Each of your poems lend strong imagery, lead the reader into a depth of meaning, and leave an ethereal mist of meaning that lingers long after the first read.
This artwork is perfect! Is it your own creation as well?
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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I suspect you are a deep thinker. (smile)
Each of your poems lend strong imagery, lead the reader into a depth of meaning, and leave an ethereal mist of meaning that lingers long after the first read.
This artwork is perfect! Is it your own creation as well?
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your compliments I'm really happy like them. Yes I am a bit of a thinker and yes I do create all my own pictures some are maybe 1 or two. The rest are digital creations I made myself i'm glad you like them thank you so much!
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An artist in multiple areas... I can try to write...but I have difficulty drawing a stick figure...so I'm very impressed!
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done a great job with the writing prompt. The poem fits all the criteria for the contest. It is beautifully written, and the artwork is perfect for the subject you wrote about. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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You have done a great job with the writing prompt. The poem fits all the criteria for the contest. It is beautifully written, and the artwork is perfect for the subject you wrote about. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for that lovely review I very much appreciate it! Your comments are wonderful. Thank you very much!
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
Stunning. This poem was both haunting and captivating - and quite simply..Relevant! Your opening line was my favorite part. "Dread the night that comes to rape the sun dispersing rays that love the day"
Just breathtaking. I personally feel strongly about the significance behind balance- and the potential consequence of disruption.
This was an exquisite poem- thank you.
<3 Jessica
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Stunning. This poem was both haunting and captivating - and quite simply..Relevant! Your opening line was my favorite part. "Dread the night that comes to rape the sun dispersing rays that love the day"
Just breathtaking. I personally feel strongly about the significance behind balance- and the potential consequence of disruption.
This was an exquisite poem- thank you.
<3 Jessica
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Happy that you feel that way thank you so much. I am I am stunned!
Amazing! So glad u like it! All the best thank u again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You used the word (frowns) will this still count for the contest? I would check it first. This sounds like a fantasy write in another world I am not familiar with, but it could be dangerous, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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You used the word (frowns) will this still count for the contest? I would check it first. This sounds like a fantasy write in another world I am not familiar with, but it could be dangerous, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you Dolly as always you are a great help to me And I have now changed the line we'll have to see how it goes. I hope you have a great and awesome day!
