The Could Haves
In another life, how could the outcome differ?2 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Well, you nailed the word count without it feeling choppy or hacked apart which is no small feat in itself.
It taps into something many parents have experienced.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
Well, you nailed the word count without it feeling choppy or hacked apart which is no small feat in itself.
It taps into something many parents have experienced.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
