True Love
True Love for You and Me8 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nicely done. I enjoy reading people's philosophy about true love.
My favorite pRt here:
True Love will faithfully endure,
No matter what challenges appear at life's door.
(Although I am not sure how true this is)
Interesting take, therefore this is an Interezting read!
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Nicely done. I enjoy reading people's philosophy about true love.
My favorite pRt here:
True Love will faithfully endure,
No matter what challenges appear at life's door.
(Although I am not sure how true this is)
Interesting take, therefore this is an Interezting read!
D
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you Douglas for your review. Just getting back to my Fanstory site. All the best to you as well.
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Thank you for you kind and excellent review. I have not written for a while do to illness but have appreciated the encouragement.
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Thank you so very much for your review and positive encouragement. " You are appreciated.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
I like the poem. It raises questions but also answers many. The way love is depicted here is of course true love, but like your question, does it not sometimes pull us apart?... Yes, the poem is good. You may want to revisit it and correct the few typos and mistakes (Impliment does not exist, you probably mean "implies"), also "their knees" ...a type on their...
Mario
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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I like the poem. It raises questions but also answers many. The way love is depicted here is of course true love, but like your question, does it not sometimes pull us apart?... Yes, the poem is good. You may want to revisit it and correct the few typos and mistakes (Impliment does not exist, you probably mean "implies"), also "their knees" ...a type on their...
Mario
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023
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Thank you Mario for your generous rating and kind review. All the best to you as well.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
True love certainly has its good days and bad days and the ups and downs can be a trial at times, but true love is most definitely worth pursuing, I enjoyed your fine words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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True love certainly has its good days and bad days and the ups and downs can be a trial at times, but true love is most definitely worth pursuing, I enjoyed your fine words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review and generous rating. Both are appreciated.
Comment from Eleri
This is an interesting love poem that includes a number of important ideas and sentiments. The poem generally reads well but you have included a number of spelling mistakes that detract from the poem's impact. For example, thier should be their, importants should be importance, and etreme should be extreme. I think you need to run a speller checker and then proof-read your work by hand just to make sure as these little things can really irritate some readers.
Having said that the poem is clever so good luck in the competition
Eleri
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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This is an interesting love poem that includes a number of important ideas and sentiments. The poem generally reads well but you have included a number of spelling mistakes that detract from the poem's impact. For example, thier should be their, importants should be importance, and etreme should be extreme. I think you need to run a speller checker and then proof-read your work by hand just to make sure as these little things can really irritate some readers.
Having said that the poem is clever so good luck in the competition
Eleri
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you so very much for your review. Very much appreciated.
Comment from BermyBye50
Cecilia,
This is an excellent entry in the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Your opening two stanza perfectly capture the real life nature of true love. Your last stanza is the perfect conclusion to a well written poem on Love.
Please note: correction need on line 4 of 5th stanza.
Driving couples who care for each other to thier [their] knees
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Cecilia,
This is an excellent entry in the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Your opening two stanza perfectly capture the real life nature of true love. Your last stanza is the perfect conclusion to a well written poem on Love.
Please note: correction need on line 4 of 5th stanza.
Driving couples who care for each other to thier [their] knees
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you again for your review and rating. Very much appreciated.
Comment from JT traveller
An enjoyable read but in my humble opinion it needs a spell check.
I can feel the sentiment in your writing, however the spelling errors misdirect my attention from the poem.
A few corrections, easily remedied, such as,
"etreme", "desturbs", "devinely", "
dilligently".
I am happy to review again as I know there is something profound in your words, if corrected.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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An enjoyable read but in my humble opinion it needs a spell check.
I can feel the sentiment in your writing, however the spelling errors misdirect my attention from the poem.
A few corrections, easily remedied, such as,
"etreme", "desturbs", "devinely", "
dilligently".
I am happy to review again as I know there is something profound in your words, if corrected.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you again for your review and rating. Very much appreciated
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The meaning of the piece is well done, however the whole of it needs a spell check done. For instance, in the first three stanzas the following were spelled incorrectly. Line ten etreme needs an "x: line twelve sh/be disturbs with an i vs e: fourteen divinely. Good luck
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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The meaning of the piece is well done, however the whole of it needs a spell check done. For instance, in the first three stanzas the following were spelled incorrectly. Line ten etreme needs an "x: line twelve sh/be disturbs with an i vs e: fourteen divinely. Good luck
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review and rating. Very much appreciated.
Comment from Kaiku
Your writing begs the question, True love will last forever more. Or the commitment will. Is today`s world lacking the essence of true love within couples as the divorce rate continues to escalate? Your poem was very nice.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Your writing begs the question, True love will last forever more. Or the commitment will. Is today`s world lacking the essence of true love within couples as the divorce rate continues to escalate? Your poem was very nice.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review and rating. Both are very much appreciated.