A Poetic Pause
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3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Wow. This is above and beyond what most ABC poems cover...
"And the clouds draped their white blankets over the mountains and hills as if to warm the land with its cottony breath."
Breathless imagery here! Each of your lines is a colorful tapestry that speaks to the senses!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Wow. This is above and beyond what most ABC poems cover...
"And the clouds draped their white blankets over the mountains and hills as if to warm the land with its cottony breath."
Breathless imagery here! Each of your lines is a colorful tapestry that speaks to the senses!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
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Oh wow I'm so glad you liked this one excellent! Thank you for taking the time to look at my work I really appreciated!
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You had me with that awesome opening line...
Comment from jessizero
Your font and background are the same color, meaning I had to copy and paste to be able to read your poem.
You did a great job with the ABC poetry format. I enjoyed your poem.
Just one more note: You need an apostrophe to make it "sea's"
Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Your font and background are the same color, meaning I had to copy and paste to be able to read your poem.
You did a great job with the ABC poetry format. I enjoyed your poem.
Just one more note: You need an apostrophe to make it "sea's"
Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much I appreciate your comments you're very helpful oh and I'm glad you enjoyed it you have yourself a great day!
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I was confused a little when reading it. I didn't see the abc part, or where it followed the contest guidelines, I could be wrong in my review. I have only read a couple of the abc poems in this style. This was well wy and your words flowed smoothly. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I was confused a little when reading it. I didn't see the abc part, or where it followed the contest guidelines, I could be wrong in my review. I have only read a couple of the abc poems in this style. This was well wy and your words flowed smoothly. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your comments I appreciate it. The first line begins with an A. The ]second line begins with a "B" 3rd line begins with a "C and the 4rh line begins with the D and the final line back to "A" again on the last line. I understand you have the lines with as many syllables as we wish so these lines are long ones. Hopefully that's OK we shall see... Thank you and I hope you have a great and awesome evening!
