One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
This is such a beautiful Haiku.
The imagery is beautiful and matches the words perfectly.
I feel the trapped spirit of the bird and its' longing to be as free as a butterfly.
Sadly it would be short lived.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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This is such a beautiful Haiku.
The imagery is beautiful and matches the words perfectly.
I feel the trapped spirit of the bird and its' longing to be as free as a butterfly.
Sadly it would be short lived.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Shirley,
Thank you very much for your time and exceptional six stars review. You are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The picture of the bird in the caged was fantastic and the butterfly was priceless. Your words were very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The picture of the bird in the caged was fantastic and the butterfly was priceless. Your words were very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can see the cage resembling a cocoon and the once free it's a beautiful butterfly. I think people are often in their self-caused cage but are capable of freeing themselves. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I can see the cage resembling a cocoon and the once free it's a beautiful butterfly. I think people are often in their self-caused cage but are capable of freeing themselves. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This also can be applied to people as well when we are put into a cage of other peoples thinking of what we should do we want to be fridge so that we can fly just as a butterfly does. Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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This also can be applied to people as well when we are put into a cage of other peoples thinking of what we should do we want to be fridge so that we can fly just as a butterfly does. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a lovely poem and a butterfly GIF. It's a very lovely poem about the dream of a cages bird. The butterfly GIF made the poem very dynamic.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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What a lovely poem and a butterfly GIF. It's a very lovely poem about the dream of a cages bird. The butterfly GIF made the poem very dynamic.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I can see how this may be. Not much room in a cage. That said though, the butterfly, cocoon-free flits from danger on every flight. ...............................................
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I can see how this may be. Not much room in a cage. That said though, the butterfly, cocoon-free flits from danger on every flight. ...............................................
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your modern haiku- nice picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- your concept is sound- being caged in life by circumstance makes most yearn for greener pastures - interestingly- magically thinking that all their problems would be solved- everyone is in a different cage in life with there own set of problems to overcome- perhaps the reason for- "count your blessings!!Good job AP
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I like your modern haiku- nice picture presentation- good word count and connection between lines- your concept is sound- being caged in life by circumstance makes most yearn for greener pastures - interestingly- magically thinking that all their problems would be solved- everyone is in a different cage in life with there own set of problems to overcome- perhaps the reason for- "count your blessings!!Good job AP
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Oh, this is a delightful haiku. So short, as haikus are, and yet so simple - a caged bird wanting to be a butterfly. Freedom in its sights beyond the metal confines. This is a very well thought out poem and a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Oh, this is a delightful haiku. So short, as haikus are, and yet so simple - a caged bird wanting to be a butterfly. Freedom in its sights beyond the metal confines. This is a very well thought out poem and a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's a striking comparison because birds eat butterflies. I guess the lack of freedom feels to the bird that it would rather be the free prey instead of the locked up predator.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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That's a striking comparison because birds eat butterflies. I guess the lack of freedom feels to the bird that it would rather be the free prey instead of the locked up predator.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Wow, I didn't know birds eat butterflies. Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your kind review, and helpfull feedback. Love you.
Marival ❤️