Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "A One Hundred Word Poem"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
15 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
It does seem to me that there are many contest out there that have very unusual rules. Some are very poetic and some are just what do you call it just playing garbage just wasn't concerned. The Writing of a 100
word poem is ridiculous. Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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It does seem to me that there are many contest out there that have very unusual rules. Some are very poetic and some are just what do you call it just playing garbage just wasn't concerned. The Writing of a 100
word poem is ridiculous. Patricia
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Patricia, for giving this a look.
Comment from jessizero
I was enjoying the poem, then I came to the end and laughed. This poem was fun, and I liked how it made light of those weird contest requirements. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I was enjoying the poem, then I came to the end and laughed. This poem was fun, and I liked how it made light of those weird contest requirements. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Jessizero
Comment from Sally Law
Bill, this is just so fun and a delightful chapter for your book.
There's nothing worse than fake meat. I can't look at it, much less eat it.
Real bacon rules!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Bill, this is just so fun and a delightful chapter for your book.
There's nothing worse than fake meat. I can't look at it, much less eat it.
Real bacon rules!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Sal
Comment from w.j.debi
I enjoyed your humorous take on contests. Some of them do offer some odd challenges. Your rhyming added to the fun, as did your "The Devil Went Down to Georgia" satire. Love the ending.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I enjoyed your humorous take on contests. Some of them do offer some odd challenges. Your rhyming added to the fun, as did your "The Devil Went Down to Georgia" satire. Love the ending.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Debi
Comment from royowen
I'm so impressed by this work, with tongue in cheek, excellent narrative and a darn good job of hi-lighting humour. We have holidayed in Malaysia in the past, being a Moslem country by and large, the bacon there is Turkey bacon, so yes, I like it, it's a good imitation. Beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I'm so impressed by this work, with tongue in cheek, excellent narrative and a darn good job of hi-lighting humour. We have holidayed in Malaysia in the past, being a Moslem country by and large, the bacon there is Turkey bacon, so yes, I like it, it's a good imitation. Beautifully written Bill, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Roy.
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A pleasure
Comment from Ric Myworld
Fake bacon makes for an okay poem, but I'm a greasy pork kind of guy who won't settle for anything less. Killing me or not. LOL. Thanks for sharing. ...........................
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Fake bacon makes for an okay poem, but I'm a greasy pork kind of guy who won't settle for anything less. Killing me or not. LOL. Thanks for sharing. ...........................
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Ric. Bacon! Accept no substitute.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and poem, Bill.
-I like this take on contests,
subtle and humorous.
-You establish the guidelines for the contest very well,
clear and concise. Effective imagery and rhyme follow,
plus good use of dialogue and the differing approaches
of the Devil and God.
-Sounds like a winning plan at the end!
-Thanks for sharing it and providing some humor.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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-Good artwork and poem, Bill.
-I like this take on contests,
subtle and humorous.
-You establish the guidelines for the contest very well,
clear and concise. Effective imagery and rhyme follow,
plus good use of dialogue and the differing approaches
of the Devil and God.
-Sounds like a winning plan at the end!
-Thanks for sharing it and providing some humor.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Pam.
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from BethShelby
I think you're poking fun at the the requirments of the contests on FanStory. They do get pretty weird at times and if you like challenges they are for you. I've not seen this particualar one but if you suggest it, I'll bet you'll get some who sign up for it.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I think you're poking fun at the the requirments of the contests on FanStory. They do get pretty weird at times and if you like challenges they are for you. I've not seen this particualar one but if you suggest it, I'll bet you'll get some who sign up for it.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I made it up as I went along for laughs. : )
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have no idea what is going on here Bill in this chaotic write about fake bacon and it amazes me how others view vegetarians. They think they are missing meat so much that they want to eat fake meat? I can tell you from personal experience that vegetarians hate fake meat and do not touch it with a barge pole. In fact any food that has been messed about with never goes into my shopping trolley. I like to see a real vegetable or piece of fruit and a real piece of fish with fins. I would never eat anything fake! How you managed to organise your words here to reach 100 I will never know, well done, you always come up with something unusual bill, just love your work, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I have no idea what is going on here Bill in this chaotic write about fake bacon and it amazes me how others view vegetarians. They think they are missing meat so much that they want to eat fake meat? I can tell you from personal experience that vegetarians hate fake meat and do not touch it with a barge pole. In fact any food that has been messed about with never goes into my shopping trolley. I like to see a real vegetable or piece of fruit and a real piece of fish with fins. I would never eat anything fake! How you managed to organise your words here to reach 100 I will never know, well done, you always come up with something unusual bill, just love your work, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Dolly. I just tried to get a hundred words into a silly poem.
Comment from nomi338
Congratulations my friend. Not only can you rhyme, you can also count to 100. I do not even want to hazard a guess as to what else you can do. I am sure you have many other talents, even if they remain very well hidden.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Congratulations my friend. Not only can you rhyme, you can also count to 100. I do not even want to hazard a guess as to what else you can do. I am sure you have many other talents, even if they remain very well hidden.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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No, those two are it.
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God bless.
