A Secret Garden
75-word fiction8 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
I voted for this precious thing. I should have realized it was you! I'm so glad you won. Best of class and beautifully penned. Sending you my best today as always and congratulations too!
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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I voted for this precious thing. I should have realized it was you! I'm so glad you won. Best of class and beautifully penned. Sending you my best today as always and congratulations too!
Sal XOs
Comment Written 16-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Hi Sal!! Thanks again :-) ( sorry for late reply...ughhh life!)
Comment from patricia dillon
This is a whimsical little piece. It must be fantastic to literally have a fairy at the bottom of the garden. I am sure the plants love her singing and dancing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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This is a whimsical little piece. It must be fantastic to literally have a fairy at the bottom of the garden. I am sure the plants love her singing and dancing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you Patricia!
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You're welcome
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
This is so sweet and it would make a great children's book!
Your choice of words creates wonderful imagery for the reader.
Your opening line was a good snag.
Great job.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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This is so sweet and it would make a great children's book!
Your choice of words creates wonderful imagery for the reader.
Your opening line was a good snag.
Great job.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you Kindly Rebecca! :-)
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
In short-beautifully scripted, illustrated and quite enthralling.
The blending of beauty, whimsy, a little bit of magic and skill
can only mean one thing...
Definitely a worthy winner.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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In short-beautifully scripted, illustrated and quite enthralling.
The blending of beauty, whimsy, a little bit of magic and skill
can only mean one thing...
Definitely a worthy winner.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you Shirley!!
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You're welcome.
Comment from WalkerMan
This brief story is a delight in our increasingly troubled world; and you have the ever loving heart to write it, inspired by the beautiful painting you found.
I'm grateful that I am still young enough at heart to appreciate this scene and your story that so well suits it.
Superb.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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This brief story is a delight in our increasingly troubled world; and you have the ever loving heart to write it, inspired by the beautiful painting you found.
I'm grateful that I am still young enough at heart to appreciate this scene and your story that so well suits it.
Superb.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
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Thank you Mike. 😊
Comment from mermaids
This is lovely and makes the reader feel good. I love the image of a fairy growing in a garden and now it is a unique and special place. Excellent writing and flow of story.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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This is lovely and makes the reader feel good. I love the image of a fairy growing in a garden and now it is a unique and special place. Excellent writing and flow of story.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Hello! And thank you for this sweet review!! 🌹🌷💐🌺🌸🌼🌻
Comment from royowen
I really liked your entry in this 75 word flash fiction post. It reminds me of the stories I once read and a child, the artwork is incredibly familiar to me, beautiful written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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I really liked your entry in this 75 word flash fiction post. It reminds me of the stories I once read and a child, the artwork is incredibly familiar to me, beautiful written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
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Hi Roy! Thank you for this lovely review! Those vintage fairy paintings are so beautiful! Glad it brought back childhood memories🌺🌹🌷🌿🧚
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It did indeed
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I?m not, ypu like her as much as me
Comment from LisaMay
Where can I get a seed like that?? (I promise I won't tell.) I'd love to share my garden with a wee little sprite. Your cute story is a delight and I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Where can I get a seed like that?? (I promise I won't tell.) I'd love to share my garden with a wee little sprite. Your cute story is a delight and I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you LisaMay! Glad it made you smile :-) Have a wonderful day!
