Reviews from

Lessons Learned and Spiritual

Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Best Valentine's Day Gift Ever"
Do good and feel good poems

40 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hi Debi, we are truly so blessed to
have our grandkids...they are what keeps
us alive...keep us going...

Carter sounds like a sweet guy...and has a
big heart...what a wonderful Valentines Day gift he
gave you...the gift of showing...I love you...

I love your poem my sweet friend...made me smile big...
and I love your picture...priceless...very nicely written...
love much...Linda xxoo


 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
    Hi Linda, thanks Sweetie for the lovely review and comments. I appreciate it so very much. And for your generous bonus star. You are awesome. Thank you again my awesome friend.

    Have you ever been so sure that you had written a thank you to someone and then the review comes back next time you come back to the site. This just happened to about eight people and I have seen it happened before. Not that I don't want to do it again, lol, but just wondering if anyone else had this happen to. I am guessing tht that it didn't save and I don't remember if I saw it say saved.
reply by l.raven on 13-Feb-2023
    Hi Debi, I'm sure it has...I have had
    some pretty strange things happen to me
    on this site...and some my own fault...

    have you ever written a long review to someone...got to the end...and hit a wrong button...or your laptop just went to a different window...and wiped it out...and you tried to remember what you wrote...I hate that...enough I can't remember what I ate for breakfast...that I try to remember what I wrote word for word...

    you are always so welcome my sweet friend...
    your pretty awesome yourself...love ya...🙏🤗💖🌼xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    Yes, I have had that two. Both thank you's and reviews being wiped out are frustrating. So when eight of them got wiped out it was a bummer because it took me two hours to write them.
reply by l.raven on 14-Feb-2023
    that's way Debi I only review
    two or three at a time...hit save...
    and go on...

    have a lovely day...🤗🙏🌻🌞
    Happy Valentines Day 💟 xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    You too my lovely sister in Christ.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    You too my lovely sister in Christ.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Awe. He sounds like such a sweet kid. Especially for a twelve year old boy. That's usually when they don't know if they're a boy one minute or a man the next. I'm sure all of your grandchildren will want parts of your writing. Great poem. And happy Valentine's day. Gretchen

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2023
    Gretchen, you are so kind. I truly would like to: clone him, but fear I'd be selfish and keep every one of them for myself. Thanks again, my dear friend. for sweetest and kindest comment ever.
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a beautifully written poem and such a sweet grandson. That was some Valentine's gift. What a sweet and wonderful poem, and I loved reading it. Your words flowed smoothly, and we'll done with your rhyming pattern. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    You are so sweet Jacqueline, I think you so much for the lovely the comments about this poem and for my grandson. Your kind comments. I so appreciate it my dear friend..
Comment from Carol Clark2
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a darling poem about your sweet grandson's valentine wishes. Carter sounds like he will make a great future writer. He will certainly lure a lovely young lady with his charm, talent, and expressions of love. Glad he shared some with you. Happy Valentine's Day! Carol

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Carol you are so sweet and I thank you so much for the lovely review and comments. Thank you also for the lovely extra shiny sta I have six wonderful grandchildren, and they all have their own different talents that I am very proud of. My granddaughter Kenzie doesn't match the art for me that you probably have seen some recently on a couple of my poems. I thank you again my dear friend . It is so appreciated.
reply by Carol Clark2 on 13-Feb-2023
    You're welcome. It's fun to see the talents and abilities that God places in each of our grandkids. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a wonderful boy! You must treasure him and his thoughtfulness. So lovely too that he will cherish your writings. That must mean a lot to you. Beautiful poem , smoothly rhymed and flowing well.
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thanks Wendy. He is also the family goofball too, so helps me with ideas for some fun posts. Aren't grand kids wonderful? I have six that
    I love equally! My granddaughter does much of my art for me, so I am blessed w something special w each one.
    Thanks again for such a lovely review and comments.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

What a sweetheart, Mr. Carter is and was that day in
particular, Debi. What an awesome surprise to awaken
to after your nap. You did a great job sharing this VDay
in verse. I liked the couplets paired to make quatrains.
Your words flowed smoothly and created great imagery.
You gave readers much info on your relationship with
Goober aka Carter. Your words and his were straight
from y'all's heart. The picture was a perfect pairing.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Jan, thank you very much for such a beautiful review and lovely words for my Poem. Goobs is indeed, a charmer, little con artist, , jokester little lover, just a wonderful kid, as all of mine are. Of course I'm not bragging lol
    Thank you again my dear friend for the wonderful comments and for the lovely six stars. You are so appreciated!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Omg, your grandson is so cute and talented! You got the best valentine's day ever. My grandson is only 5 years-old but maybe one day he'll do the same.

Well done, lucky lady.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thanks so much Marivale. when Carter was only three or four years old, we already knew that he was going to be creative and do some thing in the line of poetry writing or comedian already then as he was showing signs of creativity so I'm sure that by now you probably see that in your grandson, I have six altogether, and they are all very talented in their own ways. My granddaughter, Kenzie is an artist and does much of my artwork for my posts. Carter is always telling me jokes so it helps me to think of my lighter posts. Thank you so much for your lovely review and.Comments.

Comment from LisaMay
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

With young Goobs being so creative and having such empathy, I can see why there is such a strong connection between you two. You portray his loving thoughtfulness beautifully in this poem.

(The spelling of 'Bllessed' needs attention in top line above the poem's heading.)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    LisaMay, what a delight to hear from you! It has been so long. Thank you for the sweet comments for our boy! It might be my favorite yet!
    Once again, thanks for everything, including the feedback in introduction note about the typo! Thanks again my friend.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

"You won't be any fun, if you get sick because you're stressed,

I fell asleep, and he was just as quiet as a mouse..." Utterly charming... I am misty-eyed -- what a blessing.

Your poem is wonderful, my friend!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    You are so sweet Dawn, and I thank you so very much for always having nice things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.
reply by Dawn Munro on 12-Feb-2023
    Thank you for making it so easy, Debi. :))
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

charming and moving poem about your grandson and his special valentine's day gift of love. I see the love you have for him shining throughout your poem.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Jake, I thank you so very much for always having nice things to say and being so thoughtful in your reviews. Your kind words are always so appreciated.