Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Evocative poetry. Sometimes it is hard to understand why bad things happen to good people. Sometimes there is no explanation except from a higher power.

This line, in my humble opinion,

"God did you forget about me?" brings the entire poem together.

Another great piece of writing.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023

When I first saw the title of this I was excited about writing it and that doesn't happen each time.
Thanks for sharing your time and review.
And have a great day!.
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by JT traveller on 11-Feb-2023

Thankyou. You too.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Indeed, "why me?" Has been a constant companion that's walked with me for many decades now, but the only answer I've got, is, "I don't call you for what you are, but what you can become." Beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023

Thanks for it. When I came up with the title of this I knew I would enjoy writing it.
That doesn't happen very often.
Doctor Ricky

reply by royowen on 11-Feb-2023

Well done

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this post with us. I know we have all asked similar questions. Well, get answers in God's time.

God why God? (God, why God?)

God no warm place? (God, no warm place?)

God did you forget about me? (God, did you forget about me?)

God it feels now so Damn good! (God, it feels now so Damn good!)

Yes when I stick it in! (Yes, when I stick it in!)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2023

Thanks again Barbara for following me and giving me the advice when it comes to grammar.
Doctor Ricky