The Moon and I
a comment on relationships16 total reviews
Comment from leather
I've never heard a mean or negative thing about the moon. It's always there--just doing its job, as it has for eons. However, the exact meaning you intended for this poem became more apparent once I read your notes.
The background color seems strong, making it somewhat hard to read.
Thank you for writing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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I've never heard a mean or negative thing about the moon. It's always there--just doing its job, as it has for eons. However, the exact meaning you intended for this poem became more apparent once I read your notes.
The background color seems strong, making it somewhat hard to read.
Thank you for writing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from June Sargent
Love can be constant - and yet be ever changing - as we grow within the relationship. The moon goes through different phases all month long, but you always can count on it rising every single night. I enjoyed your analogy.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Love can be constant - and yet be ever changing - as we grow within the relationship. The moon goes through different phases all month long, but you always can count on it rising every single night. I enjoyed your analogy.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from JT traveller
The moon is always a comforting sight to behold for me.
A great entry for the ABC competition. I appreciate your author's notes identifying the metaphorical reference of the changing cycles of the moon to a relationship. Very clever. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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The moon is always a comforting sight to behold for me.
A great entry for the ABC competition. I appreciate your author's notes identifying the metaphorical reference of the changing cycles of the moon to a relationship. Very clever. Best of luck.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review!
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My pleasure as always 😊🇦🇺
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the ABC Poetry Contest.
Truth hurts sometimes but there are necessary in some instances. One doesn't want to hurt the ones they love.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words. Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason. Novalis
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Excellent entry for the ABC Poetry Contest.
Truth hurts sometimes but there are necessary in some instances. One doesn't want to hurt the ones they love.
I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words. Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.
Good luck in the contest.
Well done.
Gypsy
Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason. Novalis
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.
Comment from INtity
Hesitant, blunt and silent just like the crescent moon. Good simile to emphasize the relationship. Knowing that you are still there, is that enough to comfort? Short and strong poem.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Hesitant, blunt and silent just like the crescent moon. Good simile to emphasize the relationship. Knowing that you are still there, is that enough to comfort? Short and strong poem.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the review!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The moon is often a symbol of infidelity because of its constantly changing shape. You have interestingly taken the other point of view! Things and people may change but the essence remains!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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The moon is often a symbol of infidelity because of its constantly changing shape. You have interestingly taken the other point of view! Things and people may change but the essence remains!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your thoughtful review!
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All best wishes!
Comment from GWHARGIS
Hard as it is, it is always best to bring things to light before we let our imaginations add details and scenarios that aren't real. This was a concisely written poem. I like the one word. One word style. The open ended question at the end was a nice touch. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Hard as it is, it is always best to bring things to light before we let our imaginations add details and scenarios that aren't real. This was a concisely written poem. I like the one word. One word style. The open ended question at the end was a nice touch. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the review, and your thoughtful comments.
Comment from royowen
I think I've said before that I believe that feelings aren't our master we are there's and because we feel bad, doesn't mean anything, the heart is not to be trusted. This is beautifully written my friend, well done My friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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I think I've said before that I believe that feelings aren't our master we are there's and because we feel bad, doesn't mean anything, the heart is not to be trusted. This is beautifully written my friend, well done My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with the moon
representing a relationship.
-I like your opening lines about "easing in."
-A good comparison of the moon's phases to feelings.
-You ask a good question at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with the moon
representing a relationship.
-I like your opening lines about "easing in."
-A good comparison of the moon's phases to feelings.
-You ask a good question at the end.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2023
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Thanks for your thoughtful review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from harmony13
This is an extremely creative poem! I like how this author compares
phases of the moon to relationships! Thank you for the author's notes -
they speak volumes! I think the author's word foundation plays a very
strong part in relationships! The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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This is an extremely creative poem! I like how this author compares
phases of the moon to relationships! Thank you for the author's notes -
they speak volumes! I think the author's word foundation plays a very
strong part in relationships! The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome! Great Poem!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind review! I'm glad the author's notes were useful.
