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Random Rhyme and Petty Prose

Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Plates"
a collection of phenomenally mundane work.

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Comment from judiverse
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This flows along beautifully. That would be quite a collection, as there must be millions of different plate patterns. I love the way this leads up to the pun complate. You did a great job of getting the essentials in with this flash fiction piece. judi

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    Thank you, Judi
Comment from kahpot
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A different ending than I was expecting and that's what makes your work so readable, (I don't mean only the endings) another excellent read, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Again this was my first read of the day, I have to say again it changed my mood again. This time I had to prick my finger with a pin to make sure that I had not gone into some kind of trance that reading this had put me in. The play on word "complate" ending was unique, to say the least; to say the most: interesting. I think it was to drive my spell check crazy as it kept on trying to change it to "complete."
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
    Thank you, Mary. I hope your spellcheck feel better.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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"ComPLATEd." ROFL! You're not only an outstanding writer, but an entertainer extraordinaire! The man, his mind, and his mission to give his readers' a treat. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    Thank you, Ric, for the kind and excellent review. Bill
Comment from susand3022
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Enjoying these cute little 50-word stories with their fun little word twists at the end. I'm sure his Grandfather had a nice time contemPLATEing his completed collection. ð???
Susan :)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Susan
Comment from nomi338
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I hope that you realize or come at some point to realize that you need help. When it comes to groaners, this one should rate near the very top. "Contemplated", really Bill. I scared my poor wife, she was shocked at the painful groan I uttered uncontrollably. I explained that it was just you being you and surprisingly, she understood.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    Ahh, a fan.
Comment from lyenochka
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Com-Plate-d! I was afraid that getting the one last plate would mean that the grandfather would die because his quest in life was finished and there were no more goals.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    That is depressing. : )
reply by lyenochka on 08-Feb-2023
    You know - like the Winchester Mystery House where the lady kept adding on to the house so she wouldn't die when the construction stopped...
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very cute and well written 50 word story about collecting dishes. You used great descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I love the last line of this! completed!!! Thanks for sharing and for the smile! Blessings, teri

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Teri
reply by Teri7 on 08-Feb-2023
    you are so welcome!!!
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hahaha... complated.. I love the pun and play on words. You turned this quip into a fun short story that was an enjoyable read. Thanks for keeping us smiling, Bill!

Melissa

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2023
    Thanks, Melissa