Family Tree
Family Poem8 total reviews
Comment from Mark Kuglin
That was a wonderful poem. A very enjoyable read.
If I had a six, I'd give you one.
There's good phrasing, a nice rhythm and it has great rhymes.
Best of luck in the contest.
I hope you do well.
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That was a wonderful poem. A very enjoyable read.
If I had a six, I'd give you one.
There's good phrasing, a nice rhythm and it has great rhymes.
Best of luck in the contest.
I hope you do well.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2023
Comment from Kaiku
Family is what makes the world go round. Such a force for good and the not so good. I surmised from your poem that the family tree was and is one to be proud of. Nice.
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Family is what makes the world go round. Such a force for good and the not so good. I surmised from your poem that the family tree was and is one to be proud of. Nice.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2023
Comment from Marienkiefer
A nicely done poem. Creative allegory carried throughout, likening family dynamics to health, aging or slightly distorted in the trunk or branches...of a tree.
Loved it.
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A nicely done poem. Creative allegory carried throughout, likening family dynamics to health, aging or slightly distorted in the trunk or branches...of a tree.
Loved it.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is touching and true. Family is everything, whether we want to believe it or not. I was blessed with a large and happy family. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
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Your poem is touching and true. Family is everything, whether we want to believe it or not. I was blessed with a large and happy family. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
Comment from patcelaw
There are many family trees that have lost a branch because there were no more births in the family. How do you get very best in the contest. Have a good night and God bless. Patricia.
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There are many family trees that have lost a branch because there were no more births in the family. How do you get very best in the contest. Have a good night and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have always felt that family are important and I have a very close family and adored my Grandchildren who are very dear to me. I grew up in a strange household where parents turned their children against each other and I was determined that my family would not be like that, they are loving and kind to each other and this is how families should be, a fine, well rhymed write, love Dolly x
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I have always felt that family are important and I have a very close family and adored my Grandchildren who are very dear to me. I grew up in a strange household where parents turned their children against each other and I was determined that my family would not be like that, they are loving and kind to each other and this is how families should be, a fine, well rhymed write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
Comment from rjuselius
An interestering point of view dear anonymous! Indeed, as the family grows so does the love.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
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An interestering point of view dear anonymous! Indeed, as the family grows so does the love.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023
Comment from Terry Broxson
Nicely done! I do love the way you told the story for this contest. A very creative approach. Your presentation is wonderfully illustrated with the picture of the family tree. Good luck in the contest. Terry.
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Nicely done! I do love the way you told the story for this contest. A very creative approach. Your presentation is wonderfully illustrated with the picture of the family tree. Good luck in the contest. Terry.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2023