Comment from Rebecca Roberts1

Excellent

It is always hard to comment on a piece such as this, full of sorrow and pain.
I can say it was very well-versed, but that is so flighty and almost shallow.
Putting your life out there for others to read is brave and healing.
Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023

I thank you very much for reviewing.
And also commenting on my foolishness, which has got me to a lot of trouble helping people through the many many years.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

How terribly melancholic but so very well versed.

Your writing style is unique and creative which makes it stand out.

I agree, when we lose a loved one it is like our entire world turns black.

Great writing. I am sorry for your loss.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thanks for your comments and for reviewing this and have a blessed day.
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reply by JT traveller on 06-Feb-2023

My pleasure once again Ricky. Jacqueline

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Wow, it really leaves an impact there at the end. The reader is stunned, dazed, and very confused. I felt frustration and a need to be the one in control.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

I seem to be getting that from the other reviews but I guess that's okay?
Thanks,
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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this very emotional post with us. Yes, a child dying suddenly is a heartbreak. One that someone never completely recovers from. I hope writing these posts help you heal, a little.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

When you see me writing in my son's name you'll know I'm hurting.
You know that I'm honoring.
You know then I'm wanting.
And you'll know that I'm needing.
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