The Rogue/Pt. 1
Revised Sweet Chaos/A Novel of the Breedline series4 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This Breedline Chapter was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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This Breedline Chapter was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Doctor Ricky :) I appreciate your kind words and generous stars! Great to hear from you again!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
It appears that you are starting another Breedline story here, right? I read some of the previous ones you wrote, and I thought they were extremely good. I look forward to reading more of this story.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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It appears that you are starting another Breedline story here, right? I read some of the previous ones you wrote, and I thought they were extremely good. I look forward to reading more of this story.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2023
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Thank you, prettybluebirds :) I am rewriting the first book in my series, and wanted to share here to receive feedback. I feel a story can always be better. Thanks again for your support, generous stars, and kind words. This keeps me encouraged.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment from royowen
You've cleverly taken this back to where Drakon joins the covenant, it's information that Alexander their dad is about to mount an attack on the covenant, and he knows about Jace's beast, although at this stage, Jace is not particularly aware. So far, so good Shana, great writing, preparing for the inevitable meeting of the ways. Beautifully written, as always my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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You've cleverly taken this back to where Drakon joins the covenant, it's information that Alexander their dad is about to mount an attack on the covenant, and he knows about Jace's beast, although at this stage, Jace is not particularly aware. So far, so good Shana, great writing, preparing for the inevitable meeting of the ways. Beautifully written, as always my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you, dear friend :) Glad you approve. It's slowly starting to come together. I'm changing the scenes, but keeping to the story, adding some new things along the way. I appreciate your feedback and encouraging words.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
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Well done Shana,
Comment from Shirley McLain
So now we have the beginning of the end. I can't see what direction you take this. You have done a wonderful job once again. This chapter is full of tension, and it sure kept me reading to the end. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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So now we have the beginning of the end. I can't see what direction you take this. You have done a wonderful job once again. This chapter is full of tension, and it sure kept me reading to the end. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Shirley :) So happy your approve. It's slowly starting to come together. I'm changing the scenes, adding new things, but sticking to the original storyline. I appreciate your support and generous stars!
Sincerely,
Shana :)
