Collect This Heart
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Comment from robyn corum
CG,
Hello! So nice to see you again!
It's funny that I should read your poem immediately following Lance's offering for the Love Poem Contest. *smile* You can certainly see the flip side of things here. And I definitely like THIS side better.
To think that there are really folks out there who are sincere and looking to find a life partner - not just another ... check mark?
Though I do not have suggestions to improve your poem, I'd like to offer a couple thoughts to potentially improve your presentation.
1.) Consider using a little bit larger font so that your words will stand out better AND so they aren't overwhelmed by the artwork you've used.
2.) There is a great deal of free space at the bottom. I'd encourage you to delete most of that so folks can focus on the important stuff-- your work!
Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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CG,
Hello! So nice to see you again!
It's funny that I should read your poem immediately following Lance's offering for the Love Poem Contest. *smile* You can certainly see the flip side of things here. And I definitely like THIS side better.
To think that there are really folks out there who are sincere and looking to find a life partner - not just another ... check mark?
Though I do not have suggestions to improve your poem, I'd like to offer a couple thoughts to potentially improve your presentation.
1.) Consider using a little bit larger font so that your words will stand out better AND so they aren't overwhelmed by the artwork you've used.
2.) There is a great deal of free space at the bottom. I'd encourage you to delete most of that so folks can focus on the important stuff-- your work!
Thanks so much!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Hi Missy! Thank you for reading. I will edit font and space issues.
Judith
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only everyone we gave our heart to took care of it like this Judith, we would never had to worry about heartache ever again, a gentle and endearing write, magical, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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If only everyone we gave our heart to took care of it like this Judith, we would never had to worry about heartache ever again, a gentle and endearing write, magical, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thank you Dolly
Judith
