Taste of My Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "I'm Coming Out!"The Pathway to Pain and Misery
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again you impressed me with your writing. Thank you for sharing.
Do I red no good reason why. (I don't understand this sentence.)
Pulled my beard and hair without a though or as much as a care! (thought??)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Once again you impressed me with your writing. Thank you for sharing.
Do I red no good reason why. (I don't understand this sentence.)
Pulled my beard and hair without a though or as much as a care! (thought??)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thanks. Just a couple of minor errors that are corrected now.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from kahpot
Hello Ricky, I have read your works for a long time and thoroughly enjoyed, I will admit I got a bit lost in this one, your last three lines are excellent, yet I thought the build up to them was a bit confusing, maybe a revisit from you may help me to clarify****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Hello Ricky, I have read your works for a long time and thoroughly enjoyed, I will admit I got a bit lost in this one, your last three lines are excellent, yet I thought the build up to them was a bit confusing, maybe a revisit from you may help me to clarify****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
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Thanks kahpot but read it now.
Doctor Ricky