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The Pathway to Pain and Misery
2 total reviews
Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Once again you impressed me with your writing. Thank you for sharing.
Do I red no good reason why. (I don't understand this sentence.)
Pulled my beard and hair without a though or as much as a care! (thought??)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
Thanks. Just a couple of minor errors that are corrected now.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
kahpot
Hello Ricky, I have read your works for a long time and thoroughly enjoyed, I will admit I got a bit lost in this one, your last three lines are excellent, yet I thought the build up to them was a bit confusing, maybe a revisit from you may help me to clarify****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023
Thanks kahpot but read it now.
Doctor Ricky
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