Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Normally it is not dew I step deep in! I enjoyed this haiku for the peace it projects at a time when I need it.
Beautiful word with a great presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate your insightful review. I hope you have a wonderful day and night.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I have stepped outside in the early morning dew and have left footprints. I can bring something to this poem. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I enjoyed reading and enjoyed the complete package.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your insightful review.

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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this verse Gypsy and could imagine myself walking in the grass and getting my feet wet and leaving imprints on my sidewalk. An excellent and engaging read. :)

Melissa

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

Thank you very much, Melissa. I appreciate your wonderful review.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

I like the internal rhyme in the first line. Do you need a "~" after the first line to introduce the Satori? I like the last two lines as Satori. I like the link between "feet" as the height of dew and "footsteps".

Well done.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2023

In this case, I just need a comma at the end of the first line and it counts as satori. Satori can be in the first or third line in haiku.
In this haiku, The second and third line are connected grammatically so you don't pause.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

An excellent example for the challenge club, your words really get the mind and imagination turning, "dew-footsteps-dusty" very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

Wow, that's a completely new way to leave footprints, bathed in dew, slightly muddy prints, leaving dust binding marks in the road of life, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

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reply by royowen on 06-Feb-2023

Most welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I love those dewy mornings and that fresh moist air, you brought a typical spring day in England to me here, much enjoyed, very atmospheric, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Are you from, England? I think you live in Spain.

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reply by Dolly'sPoems on 06-Feb-2023

I live in both places x x x

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you used both alliteration and assonance in your poem. I like the contrast of being "feet deep in dew" with the "dusty road" and together the dew meets the road.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2023

Thank you very much, big sister. I always appreciate your kind reviews, and helpfull feedback.

Love you,

Marival ❤️