Comment from Luvs2write4u

Excellent

I enjoyed your poetry. The words told a very funny story, and found a period where it's not needed. You have a very distinctive voice which is new and fresh. I can't wait to read more.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024

Thank you!

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

We feel we can do magnificent deeds when we're stoned out of our heads, but can't. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Thanks. You to. I?ve written over 120 poems. I néed to put the poems in a book.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Hi, Shoeless! I enjoyed seeing your tribute at the Baseball Hall Of Fame! Only kidding! Your lack of punctuation and spacing seemed to enhance your message. One concern, unless you meant it: You ended without finishing "headache".

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2023

Read Oz Behind The Curtain

reply by jim vecchio on 14-Aug-2023

I'll make note of it.