I Have Been Waiting for This Day
Mom sends her daughter off to school23 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Short and sweet easier to read than living after the moment your child goes to school. Will they be okay, be afraid, get along or bullied, will they like the menu, are they dressed okay, so many thoughts go through our heads and yet they are likely having the time of their life.
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Short and sweet easier to read than living after the moment your child goes to school. Will they be okay, be afraid, get along or bullied, will they like the menu, are they dressed okay, so many thoughts go through our heads and yet they are likely having the time of their life.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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They are resilient. Thank you for reading and sharing.
John
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your granddaughter is sooo cute, JM. I enjoyed reading your
contest entry. Though short as required, you gave readers
great information on the bond you have with her. Now that
she's old enough to attend school, her life and your will change.
However, the bond will remain solid.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Your granddaughter is sooo cute, JM. I enjoyed reading your
contest entry. Though short as required, you gave readers
great information on the bond you have with her. Now that
she's old enough to attend school, her life and your will change.
However, the bond will remain solid.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Jan, thank you for the well wishes and for reading my post.
Thx again.
John
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Great story. I enjoyed reading it. I would have to say that every young mother would probably relate to this. Your story had good humor in it, and brought back a memory to me after my first day of kindergarten. Your story was a lovely insight into you and your daughter's relationship. I enjoyed reading it. Great flow of your words through the story, and good artwork that went with the story. Thank you for sharing.
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Great story. I enjoyed reading it. I would have to say that every young mother would probably relate to this. Your story had good humor in it, and brought back a memory to me after my first day of kindergarten. Your story was a lovely insight into you and your daughter's relationship. I enjoyed reading it. Great flow of your words through the story, and good artwork that went with the story. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you for reading. I appreciate you sharing.
Cheers to a great day.
John
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
First sentence: Daughter's - to show possession. First sentence of second paragraph: while it's hot (it is)
This is a good Dribble, but since it's for contest, I would make the changes.
Every young mother relates to this:-)
Good luck!
Pam
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First sentence: Daughter's - to show possession. First sentence of second paragraph: while it's hot (it is)
This is a good Dribble, but since it's for contest, I would make the changes.
Every young mother relates to this:-)
Good luck!
Pam
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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I made those two corrections. Thank you, Pam.
Check my post "Felt With the Heart", if you have a chance. It deals with my son at the Casa Monica.
Thanks again. John
Comment from country ranch writer
This is so true to all moms out There! We can't wait for that day to get here and then we suffer empty nest syndrome and they weren't gone by what six minutes?
Same happens when they leave home we can't wait to have the house back, ,then the tears come because we miss them already!
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This is so true to all moms out There! We can't wait for that day to get here and then we suffer empty nest syndrome and they weren't gone by what six minutes?
Same happens when they leave home we can't wait to have the house back, ,then the tears come because we miss them already!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate you stopping to read.
Cheers to a great day.
John
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Awe thank youm
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Awe thank youm
Comment from JT traveller
Five minutes. Haha. Good humour. I remember my Mum scolding me after my first day at Kindergarten. She said ,"You left me at the gate and never even looked back to cry or wave goodbye."
A lovely insight into your relationship with your daughter.
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Five minutes. Haha. Good humour. I remember my Mum scolding me after my first day at Kindergarten. She said ,"You left me at the gate and never even looked back to cry or wave goodbye."
A lovely insight into your relationship with your daughter.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
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Absolutely. The child is full of excitement for this new adventure called "school".
Thank you for reading and sharing.
John
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Thank you John.
Comment from Mary Shifman
She is absolutely beautiful! What a precious little girl. I love the story. I'm sure you will miss her. I miss the little ones in my life. I get to see them tomorrow and I look forward to it.
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She is absolutely beautiful! What a precious little girl. I love the story. I'm sure you will miss her. I miss the little ones in my life. I get to see them tomorrow and I look forward to it.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much, Mary, for reading and sharing.
Cheers to a great day.
John
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You are welcome.
Comment from eliz100
This is every mothers dilemma hold on or let go. I knew I was going to have trouble letting go, so in my spirit I practiced early. Your story is complete in so few words. I do not see any room for improvement.
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This is every mothers dilemma hold on or let go. I knew I was going to have trouble letting go, so in my spirit I practiced early. Your story is complete in so few words. I do not see any room for improvement.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
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Elizabeth, thank you for reading and sharing.
John
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Most important, the 1954 after your name, is that the year you were born? I was born in 1954. Now for the review. I completely understand. I was lucky enough to be able to stay home when my boys were little. I thought I couldn't wait until the last one was in full day school. When it happened, I was a complete disaster. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck.
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Most important, the 1954 after your name, is that the year you were born? I was born in 1954. Now for the review. I completely understand. I was lucky enough to be able to stay home when my boys were little. I thought I couldn't wait until the last one was in full day school. When it happened, I was a complete disaster. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
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Yes, 1954. December 14.
It?s a good year, right!
My wife stayed home till our third went to school full days.
Thank you for reading, sharing and the contest wishes.
Cheers for a great day.
John
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January 3rd. I'm almost a year older. My husband was December 18.
Comment from Teri7
This is a great fiction children's post you have penned. Your granddaughter is so adorable. I know you will be missing her when she is away from the family that time. Thank you for sharing with us! Teri
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This is a great fiction children's post you have penned. Your granddaughter is so adorable. I know you will be missing her when she is away from the family that time. Thank you for sharing with us! Teri
Comment Written 04-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2023
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Teri, thank you for stopping by to read and share.
John
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You are so welcome John!!!
